Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Begin with a clear direct answer about past preference, use correct past tense and avoid repetition. Keep it within 2–3 sentences: one topic sentence and one supporting detail. Correct grammar (e.g., 'when I was a child', 'I loved open spaces', 'I felt') and remove duplicated words.

Example: Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child. I especially enjoyed open spaces where I could run around and I often felt refreshed and happy after spending time there.

Suggestion: Answer directly and use present simple for habitual actions. Break into two clear sentences and add a linking word (e.g., 'however' or 'so') to show reason. Fix article use ('the park' or 'parks') and word forms ('on weekends').

Example: Yes, I still like going to parks. Because I have a busy study schedule, I often go to the park on weekends to relax and regain energy.

Suggestion: Provide a concise direct answer and specific reasons; avoid repetition and correct sentence structure. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' with clear nouns ('no gardens' not 'no garden'). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because many neighborhoods near my home lack gardens or open spaces. For example, having a small park nearby would give residents a place to exercise and relax.

Suggestion: Answer directly naming the park and give one specific reason. Use correct conditional and verb forms ('If I get a chance' or 'If I had a chance', not 'If I got a chance'), and avoid filler phrases like 'first of all'. Be specific about what you like (e.g., 'walking paths', 'flowers').

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the Rose Garden in my hometown in the future. It has many walking paths and beautiful flower beds, which make me feel refreshed and energetic when I walk there.

× If I got a chance to back in my past as a childhood, I would definitely spend more times in parks.

✓ If I could go back to my childhood, I would definitely spend more time in parks.

This sentence mixes conditional forms and has word order problems. Use the second conditional for unreal past situations: 'If I could go back' (modal ability) + 'I would...' Also use 'go back to my childhood' (correct phrase) and the uncountable/amount noun 'time' with 'more' not 'more times'. Suggestion: Use 'If I could...' for hypothetical past and 'more time' for amount.

× I loved open, open space and I feel very fresh at the park.

✓ I loved open space, and I felt very refreshed at the park.

The sentence repeats 'open' unnecessarily and mixes past and present tenses. Maintain past tense for a childhood memory: 'loved' and 'felt'. Use 'refreshed' (adjective) rather than 'fresh' to describe how you felt. Also include a comma and conjunction for clarity.

× Well, I have a busy schedule for my study in my free time, such as a weekend, I love to spend time in park to feel fresh and more energetic.

✓ Well, I have a busy study schedule, but in my free time, such as on weekends, I love to spend time in the park to feel refreshed and more energetic.

This sentence needs clearer connectors and correct prepositions. Use 'study schedule' and contrast with 'but'. Use 'in my free time, such as on weekends' and 'in the park' (correct article and preposition). Use 'refreshed' to describe feelings and parallel structure for 'refreshed and more energetic'.

× Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because there are there are nearby where I live such a no garden or open space to feel fresh or energetic.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because there are no parks or gardens near where I live to help me feel refreshed and energetic.

The original repeats 'there are' and misorders phrases. Use 'there are no parks or gardens near where I live' for correct word order and negation. Replace 'to feel fresh or energetic' with 'to help me feel refreshed and energetic' to clarify purpose. Also correct article and noun choice.

× First of all, future is unpredictable. If I got a chance to going to any park, I would definitely choose Rose Garden in my hometown because of there there are variety of roads and I feel fresh and energetic while I'm going there.

✓ First of all, the future is unpredictable. If I had a chance to go to any park, I would definitely choose Rose Garden in my hometown because it has a variety of paths, and I feel refreshed and energetic when I go there.

Multiple issues: missing article 'the' before 'future', incorrect conditional form 'If I had a chance to go' (second conditional), use base verb 'go' not 'going' after 'to'. Remove duplicated 'there' and use 'it has a variety of paths' (natural phrasing). Maintain tense consistency: 'I feel' can be present general, but 'when I go there' fits better; use 'refreshed' to describe feeling.