Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, use past tense for childhood, then contrast with present using linking word (e.g., "but" or "however"). Avoid filler words and unnecessary repetition. Give one specific detail (when/why) to support your change in attitude.

Example: I didn’t like going to parks when I was a child because I preferred playing indoors. However, now that I’m in my early thirties I enjoy walking in parks for exercise and fresh air, and I go twice a week.

Suggestion: Use a natural, grammatically correct reply: give a direct Yes/No or short topic sentence, then add specific routine details using linking words (e.g., "usually" or "sometimes"). Correct collocations ("enjoy going to the park", "on Saturday mornings"). Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy going to the park. I usually visit on Saturday mornings for a long walk, and sometimes I go in the evenings on weekdays after work.

Suggestion: Provide a clear opinion and support it with two specific reasons. Use correct singular/plural and remove fillers. Use linking words ("because", "for example") and specific benefits (e.g., "space for exercise", "community events").

Example: Yes, I would. I think more parks would give people space for exercise and family activities, and they would improve air quality and make the city more pleasant to live in.

Suggestion: Answer directly with the park name, then give specific, coherent reasons why you want to visit. Use correct relative clauses and avoid filler phrases. Mention features (size, facilities, events) and use linking words ("because", "since", "for example").

Example: Yes. I’d like to visit Benjakitti Park, which opened last year. I’ve heard it’s very large, has beautiful lakes and walking paths, and hosts cultural events, so it would be a pleasant place to relax and take photos.

× Well when I was young I didn't like going to park but since I am getting older like a early 30s I enjoy walking on the park and I make my time to go to the parks twice a week.

✓ Well, when I was young I didn't like going to parks, but since I have gotten older, around my early 30s, I enjoy walking in parks and I make time to go to parks twice a week.

The sentence uses incorrect singular/plural forms: 'going to park' and 'walking on the park' should use plural or include an article. Use 'parks' when speaking generally, and 'in parks' for walking inside them. Also 'a early 30s' is incorrect; 'around my early 30s' or 'in my early 30s' is correct. Additionally, 'I make my time' is unnatural; use 'I make time'. Suggestions: use plural 'parks' for general statements, use 'in' for being inside a park, and correct the age phrase to 'in my early 30s' or 'around my early 30s'.

× Well, I really like enjoy going to the park so much. Nowadays I usually make my time to visit the park on the morning of Saturday or in the evening on weekdays.

✓ Well, I really enjoy going to the park so much. Nowadays I usually make time to visit the park on Saturday mornings or in the evenings on weekdays.

The phrase 'like enjoy' is redundant; use either 'like' or 'enjoy'—'enjoy' fits better. 'Make my time' is incorrect; use 'make time'. 'On the morning of Saturday' should be 'on Saturday mornings' and 'in the evening on weekdays' should be 'in the evenings on weekdays' for consistent habitual present tense. Suggest using simple present for routines and correct time expressions to plural forms for habitual actions.

× Yes, I would love to see more park in my city because uh public park is the not cause a lot for people to enjoy the activity with their family, friends and also they can get more fresh air.

✓ Yes, I would love to see more parks in my city because public parks provide many places for people to enjoy activities with their family and friends, and they can get more fresh air.

Multiple singular/plural errors: 'more park' should be 'more parks'; 'public park is the not cause a lot' is ungrammatical. Use 'public parks provide many places' or 'a public park can provide many opportunities'. Also 'enjoy the activity' should be 'enjoy activities'. Suggestions: use plural 'parks' when speaking generally, use 'provide' instead of 'is the not cause', and pluralize 'activities'.

× Yes, I want to go to the park named Benjaki public park, which is the brand new park is set by the Bangkok governor like of last year. I think uh, because this is a very huge and a lot of vibrant can make people.

✓ Yes, I want to go to Benjaki Public Park, which is a brand-new park that was opened by the Bangkok governor last year. I think it is very large and vibrant and can attract many people.

The original contains multiple structural problems: redundant and misplaced nouns ('the park named Benjaki public park'), incorrect clause formation ('which is the brand new park is set by'), incorrect tense and passive form—use 'was opened by' for a past event. The second sentence lacks a clear subject and verb ('a very huge and a lot of vibrant can make people' is ungrammatical). Suggest reordering to 'Benjaki Public Park' and using a relative clause 'that was opened by' and clear adjectives 'very large and vibrant' with a clear verb 'can attract many people'.