Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Говорите чётко и прямо: начните с тематического предложения, затем добавьте одну-две конкретные причины или воспоминания. Избегайте повторов («my child», «in my childhood») и пауз с заполнителями («uh», «I don't know»). Используйте связки для логики («because», «and», «for example»).

Example: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child because they were close to my home and very safe. For example, I used to play on the swings with my neighbor every afternoon, which helped me make friends.

Suggestion: Будьте внимательны к точности слов (не путать «Paris» и «parks»). Начните с прямого ответа, объясните причину нехватки времени и добавьте конкретный план или привычку. Сократите предложение и используйте связки («but», «however», «if»).

Example: Yes, I still like going to parks, but I don't have much free time at the moment. If I can go, I usually visit with my sister or a friend because we enjoy walking and talking together.

Suggestion: Отвечайте чётко и избегайте неразборчивых сокращений («CT») и множества пауз. Дайте конкретное мнение: достаточно ли парков или нужны улучшения, и приведите пару конкретных предложений (например, более зелёные зоны, детские площадки). Используйте связки для ясности.

Example: My city already has many parks, but I think they could be improved. For example, adding more seating areas and children's playgrounds would make them more family-friendly.

Suggestion: Дайте прямой ответ и опишите конкретные характеристики парка, которые вам интересны (цветы, ландшафт, мероприятия). Уберите повторы и паузы, используйте сравнительные фразы корректно («similar to»).

Example: Yes, I would like to visit a new open park with many flower gardens. For instance, I am attracted to parks similar to those in Dubai because they have well-designed landscaping and pleasant walking paths.

× When I was a child, I liked going to parks because it is so convenient activity for me in my child, in my childhood and this.

✓ When I was a child, I liked going to parks because it was a very convenient activity for me during my childhood.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses and has article and preposition errors. Use past tense 'was' to match 'When I was a child'. Add the article 'a' before 'very convenient activity' and use 'during my childhood' for correct preposition. Improve fluency by removing redundant phrases. Suggestions: keep verb tenses consistent, use appropriate articles, and prefer 'during my childhood' over 'in my child'.

× I like to going to Paris now, but I don't have enough time to go to parks.

✓ I like going to parks now, but I don't have enough time to go to them.

The phrase 'like to going' is incorrect: after 'like' use either 'to' + base verb or verb+ing, not both. Also 'to Paris' seems unintended; context asks about parks. Use 'going to parks' and replace repeated 'parks' with 'them' for naturalness. Suggestions: use 'like going' or 'like to go', and use pronouns to avoid repetition.

× But if I have a chance to go to park, I prefer to go there with my sister or with my friend.

✓ But if I have a chance to go to a park, I would prefer to go there with my sister or a friend.

Condition about a possible future opportunity requires 'would' for the conditional ('if I had' or 'if I have' can be used but 'would' clarifies preference). Also 'to park' needs the article 'a', and 'with my friend' can be generalized to 'a friend'. Suggestions: use 'a park' and 'would prefer' for hypothetical preferences.

× Uh, my CT is rich, uh, with parks and I think uh, uh, would be better to improve our, uh, parks.

✓ My city is rich in parks, and I think it would be better to improve our parks.

'Rich, with parks' should be 'rich in parks'. Omit filler 'uh'. Use 'it would be better to improve our parks' for correct clause structure. 'CT' is unclear; 'city' is assumed. Suggestions: use 'rich in' with nouns and include subject 'it' for 'would be better' constructions.

× Uh, no, it's uh, add new parks in my country.

✓ No, I mean we should add new parks in my city/country.

Original lacks a proper verb phrase and subject. 'It's add' is ungrammatical. Clarify intention: 'we should add' or 'they should add'. Choose 'city' or 'country' consistently. Suggestions: use modal 'should' to express recommendation and include subject.

× If I have enough time to go, uh, to any park in my country, for instance, I prefer to go to new, uh, open park with flowers, which same with Dubai park and it's, it's very interesting for me and I prefer to go.

✓ If I have enough time to go to any park in my country, for instance, I would prefer to go to a new open park with flowers, similar to the parks in Dubai; that would be very interesting for me.

Use 'would prefer' for hypothetical future preference. Add articles 'a' before 'new open park'. 'Which same with Dubai park' is ungrammatical; use 'similar to the parks in Dubai'. Remove fillers and fix sentence flow. Suggestions: use 'would prefer', include articles, and use 'similar to' for comparisons.