Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid fillers like “like” and repetition. Also correct verb forms (e.g., “I liked going to parks” and “we used to play”).

Example: I liked going to parks as a child because I loved being outdoors. For example, I often rode my bike there and played simple games with my friends, such as catching sparrows and playing tag, which made my childhood very enjoyable.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer then specific reasons. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., “green,” “trees,” “relax”) and reduce repetitions. Use linking words (because, so) to connect ideas and limit to 3–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they are full of trees and flowers which help me relax. For instance, I often sit and watch people walking while I admire the sky and greenery, and this calms my mind after a busy day.

Suggestion: Answer directly and provide two clear reasons with specific details. Avoid vague words and filler sounds. Use correct collocations (e.g., “green spaces” instead of “positive aura”) and improve sentence structure to be more natural.

Example: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because green spaces improve public health and reduce stress. For example, people could walk or sit in a quiet park near their homes, which would make crowded urban neighborhoods feel less noisy and more pleasant.

Suggestion: Provide a clear, correctly structured response: name the park, say why you want to visit, and give a specific plan or reason. Avoid hesitation and redundant phrases; use simple past or present perfect accurately.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit Godawari Park in Kathmandu because I have heard it has beautiful gardens and hiking trails. I have never been there, but next time I visit Kathmandu I plan to spend a day exploring the park and taking photos of the scenery.

× Yes, definitely I like to going parks as a child because I was like so much into the nature things and just enjoy my like childhood and like roaming her in there and just using some like Sparrow and other games like we used to play since childhood.

✓ Yes, definitely I liked going to parks as a child because I was very interested in nature and enjoyed my childhood, roaming there and playing games like Sparrow and other games we used to play.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses and incorrectly uses 'to going' instead of the correct verb form. After 'like to' you use the base verb (like to go) or use 'liked going' to express past habit. Use 'liked going' to match 'as a child' (past). Also correct preposition 'to parks' and remove filler words. Improve clarity by using consistent tense and proper verb forms. Suggestion: Use 'liked going to parks' for past habitual actions and avoid 'to' + gerund; use either 'like to go' (present) or 'liked going' (past).

× And I also like to ride a bike and that is also mentioned in the.

✓ I also liked to ride a bike, and that is also mentioned in the list.

The context 'as a child' requires past tense 'liked' not present 'like'. The original sentence is incomplete ('in the.' ) so add an appropriate noun such as 'list' or 'record'. Ensure tense consistency with surrounding sentences. Suggestion: Keep past tense for childhood habits and complete the sentence with the missing object.

× Yes, I still like going to parks now since the parks are so much greenery and I'll just like flowers and just like my heart melts when I see like the old greener environments and people roaming here and there.

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks because they are very green; I love the flowers and my heart melts when I see the green environment and people walking around.

The sentence uses awkward expressions and wrong noun forms: 'parks are so much greenery' should be 'parks are very green' or 'have a lot of greenery'. 'I'll just like flowers' is incorrect; use 'I love the flowers'. Maintain present tense for current habits. Remove filler 'like' used excessively. Suggestion: Use clear nouns ('green', 'greenery') and verbs ('love', 'melt') with present simple for current preferences.

× So and I also like to sit there and just like wonder about the natures, the sky and the blue and just like Citadel with chill mindset.

✓ I also like to sit there and wonder about nature, the sky, and the blue, relaxing with a calm mindset.

'Wonder about the natures' is incorrect plural and article use; 'nature' is uncountable. 'Citadel' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'sit idle' or 'chill' — replaced with 'relaxing'. Use gerund 'wonder' after 'like to sit and'. Remove extra filler 'like'. Suggestion: Use uncountable nouns correctly ('nature'), choose appropriate vocabulary ('relax' or 'calm'), and keep parallel verb forms.

× Yes, of course, if I had to say that, I would definitely say that I would like to see more parks in my city.

✓ Yes, of course; if I had to say, I would definitely say that I would like to see more parks in my city.

Grammatically this sentence is acceptable but contains redundancy 'if I had to say that, I would definitely say that'. It's not a verb participle error per se, but to follow instructions only correct items in the provided list; here simplify wording to avoid repetition. Suggestion: Remove redundant phrases for clarity and naturalness.

× Sands parks generate more like positive aura and energy.

✓ Parks generate a more positive aura and energy.

'Sands parks' is incorrect and unclear; likely meant 'parks' in general. 'More like' is colloquial and inappropriate; use 'a more positive aura'. Use singular article 'a' with 'positive aura'. Suggestion: Use clear adjective phrases ('more positive') and avoid filler 'like'.

× When people are brain people just go and sit in the parks and just enjoy the time being there in the peace.

✓ When people are stressed, they just go and sit in parks and enjoy being there in peace.

'brain people' is incorrect and unclear — likely intended 'busy' or 'stressed'. The phrase 'enjoy the time being there in the peace' is awkward; rephrase to 'enjoy being there in peace'. Maintain subject-verb agreement and clarity. Suggestion: Choose correct noun/adjective ('stressed' or 'busy') and use natural expressions like 'enjoy being there in peace'.

× We just uh, since local areas are so much Cayos and urban areas also so messy yeah.

✓ Many local areas are very chaotic, and urban areas are also messy.

'Cayos' is not English; likely meant 'chaotic'. 'So much' + adjective is informal; use 'very'. Remove filler 'uh' and 'yeah'. Suggestion: Use correct adjectives and avoid filler words for clearer speech.

× Yes, I wanted to go the park, which is located in the central region of my country, which is in Kathmandu.

✓ Yes, I want to go to the park located in the central region of my country, in Kathmandu.

The student mixes past 'wanted' with intended future action; question asked about future, so use present/future 'want to go' or 'would like to go'. Also missing preposition 'to' after 'go'. Suggestion: Use 'want to go' or 'would like to go' for future intentions and include necessary prepositions.

× So that's a park name is Godawari.

✓ The park's name is Godawari.

'So that's a park name is Godawari' is ungrammatical. Use possessive form 'the park's name' or 'the name of the park'. Suggestion: Use correct article and possessive structures: 'The park's name is...' or 'The name of the park is...'.

× I have never been to the place uh, whenever I go to Kathmandu, it's like kind of I'm so much not, uh, able to uh, attend those parks.

✓ I have never been to that place; whenever I go to Kathmandu, I have not been able to visit those parks.

Use present perfect 'have never been' correctly for life experience. The second clause should use present perfect 'have not been able' to indicate past attempts up to now. 'Attend those parks' is wrong verb; use 'visit'. Remove fillers and correct word order. Suggestion: Use 'have not been able to visit' for actions not yet accomplished and choose correct verbs like 'visit'.

× So if I'm in coming future, I will definitely go there and visit.

✓ So if I go there in the near future, I will definitely visit.

'I'm in coming future' is ungrammatical. Use 'in the near future' or 'when I go in the future'. Maintain correct conditional/future structure: 'If I go..., I will...'. Suggestion: Use standard future time expressions ('in the near future') and correct conditional form.