Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the answer grammatically correct, more natural and slightly expanded with one supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, use past tense, and add a brief specific reason or memory. Keep it under five sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. I often went there with my family to play games and feed the ducks, which made those afternoons really fun and memorable.

Suggestion: Use present tense carefully and improve grammar and word choice (e.g., "for mental relaxation" or "to relax"). Begin with a direct topic sentence, then give a specific example of when or why you visit. Use a linking word if giving additional detail.

Example: I don't go as often as I used to, but I sometimes visit parks to relax. For example, I go there on weekends to read or take a short walk when I need a break from work.

Suggestion: Answer directly, avoid filler words, and give a clear reason with one specific detail. Use correct phrasing (e.g., "I live in the neighborhood" and "there are two parks"). Keep it concise and coherent with a linking word if needed.

Example: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because there are only two parks in my neighborhood, and additional green spaces would give people more places to exercise and relax.

Suggestion: Be specific about the place and express future plans clearly. Replace informal or religious phrases like "in sha Allah" in the test context with "I hope" or "I plan to," and give a brief reason why you want to go. Keep it to one or two sentences.

Example: Yes, I would love to visit Disneyland in the future because I have admired it since childhood for its attractions and shows, and I hope to go there within the next few years.

× Yes, I like to go park as a child.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks when I was a child.

The original mixes present tense 'like' with the past time reference 'as a child'. Use past tense 'liked' and a gerund 'going'. Also 'park' needs an article or plural; 'parks' is natural when speaking generally. Suggestion: match tense to time reference and use plural for general activities.

× Yes, I like to go park as a child.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks when I was a child.

In English, singular countable nouns need an article (a/an/the) or should be plural for general statements. 'Go park' is ungrammatical; use 'go to a park' or 'go to parks'. Also tense should be past to match 'as a child'.

× Not now, but sometimes I go to park for my mentally relaxation.

✓ Not now, but sometimes I go to the park for my mental relaxation.

The activity refers to a habitual present so present tense 'go' is okay, but 'go to park' needs 'the' or 'a'. 'Mentally relaxation' is incorrect: use the adjective 'mental' before the noun 'relaxation'. Use 'the park' if referring to parks in general or 'a park' if any park.

× Not now, but sometimes I go to park for my mentally relaxation.

✓ Not now, but sometimes I go to the park for my mental relaxation.

'Mentally' is an adverb; here an adjective 'mental' is required to modify the noun 'relaxation'. Also include appropriate article before 'park'. Suggestion: use 'mental relaxation' or 'to relax mentally'.

× Yes, obviously I, I also live in the society. There's, uh, two parks at there.

✓ Yes, obviously. I also live in the community. There are two parks there.

Redundant 'I, I' should be a single 'I'. 'In the society' is unnatural; 'in the community' or 'in this neighborhood' is better. 'There's two parks' uses singular contraction with plural noun; use 'There are two parks'. 'At there' is incorrect preposition; use 'there'.

× Yes, obviously I, I also live in the society. There's, uh, two parks at there.

✓ Yes, obviously. I also live in the community. There are two parks there.

The structure 'There is/There are' must agree with the number of the noun. 'There is' with plural 'two parks' is incorrect; use 'There are'. Also remove redundant words and fix preposition 'at there' to 'there'.

× Yes, it's my dream to go Disneyland and it's my childhood dream, so in sha Allah I will decide to go somewhere.

✓ Yes, it's my dream to go to Disneyland; it has been my childhood dream, so, inshAllah, I will decide where to go.

Use 'go to Disneyland' (need preposition 'to'). 'It's my childhood dream' is better expressed as 'it has been my childhood dream' to show continuity from past to present. 'In sha Allah' should be written 'inshAllah' or 'in sha' Allah' but keep spacing consistent; here 'inshAllah' is acceptable. 'Decide to go somewhere' is vague; 'decide where to go' is clearer. Ensure future tense 'will decide' is fine for future intention.