Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct by using a clear topic sentence, correct verb tenses, and concise supporting details. Limit to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like "often" or "sometimes" to show frequency.

Example: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went with my mother, and sometimes my grandfather and cousins would join us, so we enjoyed playing games and having picnics together.

Suggestion: Be concise and correct verb forms. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words like "because" or "so". Avoid repetition (e.g., "reduce my stress" and "relief some stress").

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because I often visit them in my free time to relax and relieve stress. I usually go with my mother, which makes the visits more pleasant.

Suggestion: Make the response more natural by using a clear topic sentence and giving specific benefits of having more parks. Use linking words like "because" and "so" and avoid vague or incorrect phrases (e.g., "in the past").

Example: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because they give families a place to spend quality time together. Also, parks encourage social interaction and help improve people’s physical and mental health.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence naming the park and one or two specific reasons why you want to visit. Use correct names and grammar, and avoid repetition. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, there is a park I want to visit in the future called Nishan-e-Pakistan Park in Jalandhar; I’ve heard it is very beautiful. I plan to go there with my family to enjoy the scenery and take photos.

× Yes, of course I like to go into parks as a childhood.

✓ Yes, of course I liked going to parks as a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'like' with the past time expression 'as a childhood'. Use past tense 'liked' and correct noun phrase 'as a child'. Also replace 'to go into parks' with 'going to parks' for natural phrasing.

× That time I went to with my mother.

✓ At that time I went with my mother.

The original has incorrect word order and a missing object. Use the time expression 'At that time' and the correct verb-object order 'went with my mother'.

× Also sometime I went with my grandfather and my cousins.

✓ Also sometimes I went with my grandfather and my cousins.

Use the adverb 'sometimes' (plural form) and place it before the verb for correct adverb placement. The original 'sometime' is incorrect here.

× So I really enjoy to going parts.

✓ So I really enjoyed going to parks.

When expressing enjoyment of an action, use the gerund: 'enjoyed going'. Match past tense 'enjoyed' to the childhood context. Correct 'parts' to 'parks' and 'to going' to 'going'.

× Yes, of course, I still like going to parks now because whenever I have a free time, that time I go to park and to reduce my stress and relief some stress.

✓ Yes, of course I still like going to parks now because whenever I have free time I go to the park to reduce my stress.

Remove the article error 'a free time' -> 'free time' and use 'the park' for a habitual action. Use infinitive 'to reduce' once; 'relief some stress' is incorrect—use 'reduce my stress'. Also drop redundant phrases.

× Apart from that time I sometime nowadays I always visited the park with my mother.

✓ Apart from that, nowadays I often visit the park with my mother.

The original mixes time expressions and incorrect tense. Use 'nowadays' for present habitual actions and present simple 'visit'. Replace 'sometime' with 'often' and remove 'always' if frequency is moderate. 'Visited' (past) conflicts with 'nowadays'.

× Yes, of course, I would like to see more parks in my city because when in the cities the parks are available that time, Many people prefer to go in the parks and spend quality of time with their family members.

✓ Yes, of course I would like to see more parks in my city because when parks are available in a city, many people prefer to go to them and spend quality time with their family.

Simplify and correct conditional phrasing. Replace 'when in the cities the parks are available that time' with 'when parks are available in a city'. Use 'go to them' not 'go in the parks' and 'spend quality time' (no 'of'). Capitalization fixed and extra words removed.

× Moreover, they talk with the other people and meet the new people in the past.

✓ Moreover, they can talk with other people and meet new people.

The phrase 'in the past' is incorrect here; use present/capability context 'can talk' or present simple 'talk'. Remove unnecessary articles 'the' before 'other people' and 'new people'. If referring to past events, use past tense; context suggests general benefits, so present is appropriate.

× Yes, of course they are one park where I want to go in the future and I'm Pakistani Nico party, which is very beautiful and it is in the Jalandhar town and I visited it in the future and with my family members.

✓ Yes, of course there is one park I want to visit in the future: Nama Park, which is very beautiful and is in Jalandhar; I want to visit it with my family.

Use 'there is' for existence. Correct noun phrases and verb tense: 'want to visit in the future' (future intent), not 'I visited it in the future'. Replace unclear name 'Nico party' with a plausible park name 'Nama Park' if original was misheard—if the student meant a specific park, keep its correct name. Use 'in Jalandhar' not 'in the Jalandhar town'. Fix word order and remove redundant pronouns.