Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise, use past tense when talking about childhood, and give one or two specific memories with clear linking words. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

Example: Yes, I loved going to the park as a child. I often went there with my parents and played football with my father every weekend, which is why I still enjoy visiting parks today.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence in present tense, then explain reasons with linking words (for example, because/so) and give a specific recent habit. Correct grammar (e.g., "are connected", "we play cricket").

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to the local park. Because many of my childhood memories are connected to it, I often go there in the evenings to play cricket with my friends.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and list specific benefits using linking words (for example/also). Use correct plurals and natural phrasing ("parks are", "exercise"). Provide one concrete suggestion (e.g., more playgrounds, green spaces).

Example: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city. For example, more green spaces and playgrounds would encourage neighbours to meet, provide safe places for children to play, and offer spots for people to exercise.

Suggestion: Respond directly and avoid unnecessary repetition. Use correct names and tense ("I have been to Sea World and Imagica, but I would like to visit Disney World and Universal Studios in the future"). Add a reason why you want to go to make the answer more specific.

Example: Yes, I would love to visit Disney World and Universal Studios in the future because I enjoy themed rides and immersive shows; I have previously been to Sea World and Imagica, which made me eager to try larger parks.

× Yes, I do like to go to the park as a child because when I was a child I used to go there with my parents and that's the reason I like to go in a park nowadays.

✓ Yes, I liked going to the park as a child because I used to go there with my parents, and that's the reason I like going to the park nowadays.

The sentence mixes past and present incorrectly. 'As a child' and 'when I was a child' require past tense ('liked'). Use 'used to' for habitual past actions. Also use 'going to the park' consistently and the article 'the park' instead of 'a park' when referring to the same place. Suggestion: keep past descriptions in past tense and parallel gerund forms for consistency.

× Also, back when I was a child, I used to go there and play with my father even though sometimes it may happen that.

✓ Also, when I was a child I used to go there and play with my father, although sometimes that did not always happen.

The original ends with an incomplete clause 'sometimes it may happen that' and mixes tenses ('used to' with 'may'). Replace with a complete past-focused clause. Suggestion: finish the idea in past tense and avoid 'may' when talking about past habitual exceptions.

× Yes, I still like to go to the nearby park because when I was a child I used to go in a park.

✓ Yes, I still like to go to the nearby park because when I was a child I used to go to a park.

Use the preposition 'to' with 'go' (go to a park), not 'go in a park.' Also choose 'a park' if speaking generally about any park, or 'the park' if referring to the same specific park. Suggestion: use 'go to' for movement toward places.

× So that's why all my childhood memories are connect with that park and during evening time we play cricket in that park.

✓ So that's why all my childhood memories are connected with that park, and in the evenings we play cricket in that park.

'Connect' should be the past participle 'connected' to form the passive/participial adjective with 'are.' Also use 'in the evenings' for habitual action and add a comma before the conjunction. Suggestion: use correct participle forms and standard time expressions.

× Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because park are such places where people can communicate with each other.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because parks are such places where people can communicate with each other.

'Park are' is incorrect: plural noun needs plural form 'parks are.' The article 'the' is not needed when speaking generally about parks. Suggestion: match number (plural) between noun and verb.

× Even though you can do your physical workout in the park and kids can play their physical daily activities such as sports.

✓ You can do physical workouts in the park, and children can play and do daily physical activities such as sports.

The sentence begins with 'Even though' but does not complete the contrast; it reads like a fragment. Also 'kids can play their physical daily activities' is awkward. Use 'children' or 'kids' consistently and restructure to present two related positive statements. Suggestion: avoid leaving 'even though' without contrast, and use clear noun phrases.

× Yes, definitely I would like to go to the theme parks such as Disney World or Universal Studio in the future.

✓ Yes, definitely I would like to go to theme parks such as Disney World or Universal Studios in the future.

When speaking generally, omit 'the' before 'theme parks.' Also the proper name is 'Universal Studios' (plural). Suggestion: use correct proper nouns and omit unnecessary definite article for general preference.

× And even though I have been to the Sea World and Imagica uh, in my past, but I would like to go in the future at Disney World and Universal Studio.

✓ Although I have been to Sea World and Imagica in the past, I would like to go to Disney World and Universal Studios in the future.

The sentence has redundant conjunctions ('And... but') and incorrect preposition placement ('go in the future at'). Use 'Although' to introduce contrast and 'go to' with destination. Also 'the Sea World' is unnecessary; proper names don't need 'the' here. Suggestion: remove redundant conjunctions, place time expressions appropriately, and use 'go to' for destinations.