Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời cần sửa ngữ pháp cơ bản, dùng thì quá khứ khi nói về thời thơ ấu, cải thiện phát âm số ít/ số nhiều, và làm rõ câu chủ đề trước khi nêu chi tiết. Hạn chế lỗi như 'I like go' → 'I liked going', 'friend' → 'friends'. Thêm liên từ đơn giản để mạch lạc (for example, 'for example' hoặc 'also'). Giữ độ dài dưới 5 câu.

Example: I liked going to parks when I was a child. There were many activities to enjoy; for example, I often played football and basketball with my friends. We also cycled together around the paths, which was great fun.

Suggestion: Nội dung khá rõ nhưng có lỗi từ vựng và cấu trúc: 'read the fresh air' không đúng, nên dùng 'breathe' hoặc 'enjoy the fresh air'. Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn và dùng liên từ để nối ý (for example, also, because). Giữ số câu tối đa 4–5 câu và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể (thời gian hoặc tần suất).

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because I can breathe the fresh air and relax. For example, I often play football and basketball with my friends there on weekends. I also like to cycle along the park paths to unwind.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có ý rõ ràng nhưng cần sửa ngữ pháp và dùng từ chính xác: 'more park' → 'more parks', 'make my city more fresh' → 'make the city fresher' hoặc 'improve air quality'. Nên mở rộng bằng lý do cụ thể và một dẫn chứng (ví dụ: hơn không gian xanh, giảm ô nhiễm). Dùng liên từ để nối ý (for instance, because, so).

Example: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they would help improve air quality and make the city feel fresher. For instance, more green spaces could reduce pollution and provide places for people to exercise and relax.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời rất ngắn và chưa hoàn chỉnh; cần trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể: tên một công viên hoặc loại công viên, lý do muốn đến và khi nào. Dùng thì tương lai đúng ('I would like to go to', 'I plan to visit'). Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu.

Example: In the future, I would like to visit the central botanical garden in my city because I've heard it has beautiful plants and peaceful walking paths. I plan to go there next spring when the flowers are in bloom.

× I like go to parks and try because there are many things to do first.

✓ I like going to parks and trying new activities because there are many things to do.

Student used base form after 'like' and 'try' instead of the -ing form. After verbs like 'like' and 'try' when expressing general preferences or activities, use the gerund: 'like going', 'try doing' or 'try new activities'. Also reorganized word order for clarity.

× I can play football and basketball with my friend.

✓ I can play football and basketball with my friend.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable if referring to one friend. If the student meant multiple friends, use plural 'my friends' to match meaning. No change required unless intending plural.

× We also can cycle together.

✓ We can also cycle together.

Position of the adverb 'also' is better placed after the modal 'can' for natural word order: 'We can also cycle together.' The verb 'cycle' stays in base form after modal 'can', so change is about adverb placement (adverb placement is part of sentence structure but fits here).

× I still like going to parks now because I can read the fresh air.

✓ I still like going to parks now because I can breathe the fresh air.

The verb 'read' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'breathe'. Use 'breathe the fresh air' to express inhaling fresh air. Tense 'like' and 'can breathe' are appropriate present tense.

× I also play football and basketball with my friends.

✓ I also play football and basketball with my friends.

This sentence is correct: plural 'friends' matches 'play'. No grammatical change needed.

× I often go there to relax and cycle.

✓ I often go there to relax and to cycle.

Original sentence is acceptable. To show parallel infinitives, optionally include 'to' before 'cycle': 'to relax and to cycle.' Both versions are grammatically correct.

× I think I would like to see more park in my city because it can make my city more fresh and easy to breathe.

✓ I think I would like to see more parks in my city because they would make my city fresher and easier to breathe in.

'Park' should be plural 'parks' after 'more'. 'It' is incorrect to refer to multiple parks; use 'they' or rephrase. Adjective 'more fresh' should be comparative 'fresher'. 'Easy to breathe' needs construction 'easier to breathe in' for natural English. Also changed conditional/modal nuance: 'would like' with 'would make' or 'could make' is appropriate.

× My city is very polluted.

✓ My city is very polluted.

This sentence is correct and uses appropriate present tense and adjective 'polluted'. No change needed.

× In the future I want to go the.

✓ In the future I want to go to the park.

The original sentence is incomplete and missing an object after the preposition 'to'. Add 'to the park' or specify a park name. Also include 'to' after 'go' when indicating destination: 'go to the park.'