Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer grammatically correct, concise and clearer. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and use correct verb tenses and articles.

Example: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went with my parents, and I remember playing on the swings and having picnics under a big tree, which made the park a very happy place for me.

Suggestion: Use correct present tense and avoid repeating the same idea. Give a clear reason and one specific example of what you do at parks now. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they help me relax and stay active. For example, I go jogging there every morning, and the fresh air and trees make me feel refreshed.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence and specific, well-structured supporting reasons. Use accurate adjectives and articles, and link reasons with words like “because” and “for example.”

Example: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because green spaces improve air quality and provide safe places for children and older people. For example, a small neighborhood park with benches and walking paths would encourage families to spend time outdoors.

Suggestion: Correct the grammar and give a clear reason why you want to visit that park, plus one specific detail about what you hope to do there. Use linking words like “because” or “so that.”

Example: Yes, I would love to visit a national park near Delhi in the future because I have always dreamed of seeing wild animals and experiencing a large forest. For example, I hope to go on a guided wildlife walk and take photographs of birds and deer.

× Yes, I like going back.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks when I was a child.

The response refers to a past habit so past tense should be used (liked). Also 'going back' is unclear; replace with 'going to parks' to match the question context and 'when I was a child' clarifies time. Use past tense for past habits and include the object 'parks' for clarity.

× I was go park with my parents, my many memory connected with the park and I would like park.

✓ I used to go to the park with my parents; I have many memories connected with the park and I liked it.

Multiple errors: 'was go' is incorrect; use 'used to go' for past habitual actions. 'park' needs the article 'the' or plural 'parks' and 'to' after 'go'. 'my many memory' should be 'I have many memories' (plural) and 'would like park' should be 'liked it' to indicate past enjoyment. Keep consistent past tense for past experiences.

× Yes, I still going park now because park is very good place for me and park my many memories connected with park.

✓ Yes, I still go to the park now because the park is a very good place for me and many of my memories are connected with it.

Present simple 'go' is required for habitual present actions; 'still going' is missing auxiliary. Use 'go to the park'. Add definite article 'the' for a specific place. 'my many memories connected with park' needs grammatical subject and verb: 'many of my memories are connected with it'. Pronoun 'it' refers to the park.

× Park is good for everywhere and good for health, our health.

✓ Parks are good for people everywhere and for our health.

Use plural 'parks' when speaking generally. 'Good for everywhere' is incorrect; say 'good for people everywhere'. 'Good for health, our health' is redundant; 'for our health' is correct and natural. Ensure subject-verb agreement when generalizing.

× Yes, I would like more park in my city because park is a greenest place and park zone attached with a tree which gave oxygen and park is good for old and child.

✓ Yes, I would like more parks in my city because parks are green places and the park areas are full of trees that produce oxygen; parks are good for the elderly and children.

'Would like more park' needs plural 'parks' when speaking generally. 'Greenest place' is a superlative and incorrect here; use 'green places' or 'greener areas'. 'Park zone attached with a tree' is incorrect structure; use 'park areas are full of trees' and 'that produce oxygen' (present simple). 'Old and child' should be 'the elderly and children'. Maintain consistent agreement and correct noun forms.

× Park is a natural place where we feel.

✓ A park is a natural place where we can relax and enjoy nature.

The original sentence is incomplete: 'where we feel' needs an object or verb phrase. Use 'where we can relax and enjoy nature' to convey the intended meaning. Add article 'a' before 'park' for singular general reference.

× Yes I want in future going a Delhi National Park because this is my child dream.

✓ Yes, in the future I want to visit a national park near Delhi because it was my childhood dream.

Use 'in the future' and 'want to visit' (infinitive). 'going a Delhi National Park' is incorrect word order and missing preposition. 'This is my child dream' should be 'it was my childhood dream' (past tense 'was' and 'childhood' as adjective). Keep tense consistent: dreams from childhood are usually expressed in past tense.

× I see all animal and joint with forest and green city.

✓ I want to see all the animals and join the forest and green environment.

'I see all animal' needs plural 'animals' and article 'the' if specific. 'Joint with forest' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'join the forest' or 'be part of the forest' or 'visit the forest'. 'Green city' should be 'green environment' or 'green city areas'. Also use 'want to' to match future intention. Provide clear verbs and correct prepositions.