Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more grammatically accurate, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence (past tense), avoid repetition, and add one specific example of activities you did. Use linking words (for example, because, and) to connect ideas. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they were exciting and full of activities. For example, I used to play on the swings and join group games with other children, which helped me make friends. These experiences made parks one of my favorite places to spend weekends.

Suggestion: Use correct verb forms and reduce hesitations. Begin with a clear present-tense statement, then add one or two specific reasons with linking words (because, for example). Avoid trailing off and incomplete sentences.

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they help me relax and feel closer to nature. For example, I like walking among trees and watching birds, which makes me feel peaceful after a busy day.

Suggestion: Be clear and accurate: start by answering the question directly (Yes/No) and explain why. Avoid unclear phrases like “less of horror.” Use correct sentence structure and one specific reason or expectation about more parks.

Example: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide green space and places for families to relax. I am also moving to another city next month where I expect there will be many parks, and I am excited to explore them.

Suggestion: Good direct answer. Improve by using more precise vocabulary and a linking word to compare destinations. Mention a specific park or feature you want to see and keep sentences concise (2–3 sentences).

Example: Yes, I would love to visit parks in Singapore, such as Gardens by the Bay, because of its impressive green architecture and comfortable public spaces. I would also like to visit parks in Japan to experience their tranquil gardens and seasonal cherry blossoms.

× Well, I like going to parks when I was child because it was an exciting activity and I met a lot of people there.

✓ Well, I liked going to parks when I was a child because it was an exciting activity and I met a lot of people there.

The sentence mixes present tense 'I like' with past time reference 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'liked' to match the past time frame. Also add the article 'a' before 'child'. Suggestion: maintain consistent tense for actions in the past and include necessary articles.

× And then there is a lot of activities.

✓ And then there were a lot of activities.

The phrase 'a lot of' is fine but must agree in number with the noun and the verb tense. 'Activities' is plural, so use plural verb 'were' for past context. Also match past tense from previous sentence. Suggestion: use 'there were a lot of activities' when describing past scenes.

× We playground and.

✓ We played on the playground.

The original is fragmentary and lacks a proper verb form. 'Playground' is a noun; to show the action use the verb 'played' and the preposition 'on' for location. Suggestion: form a complete clause with subject + past verb + prepositional phrase.

× I'm still like going to parks right now because it is give me some relaxation, give me an, a healing moment to more, uh, become one with the nature.

✓ I still like going to parks right now because they give me some relaxation and a healing moment to become one with nature.

The speaker used 'I'm still like' incorrectly; use simple present 'I still like'. 'Parks' plural requires plural pronoun 'they' and verb 'give'. Remove extra articles and filler words; use 'a healing moment'. 'Become one with nature' does not need 'the'. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions and match subject-verb agreement.

× Honestly, I like when I see many playgrounds, see many animals in the parks and then spend.

✓ Honestly, I like seeing many playgrounds, seeing many animals in the parks, and then spending time there.

Use gerunds ('seeing', 'spending') after 'like' for activities. The original ends abruptly with 'spend'; complete the idea with an object ('time') and location ('there'). Suggestion: use parallel gerund structure and complete the clause.

× Honestly in my city it's less of horror but next month I probably I will move to other city and I guess there are a lot of parks so I'm excited to explore more parks in that city.

✓ Honestly, in my city it's less horrific, but next month I will probably move to another city and I guess there will be a lot of parks, so I'm excited to explore more parks there.

Several issues: 'less of horror' is unnatural — use 'less horrific' or 'not very scary'. Word order 'I probably I will' is incorrect; use 'I will probably'. 'Other city' needs the determiner 'another city'. For future assumption use 'there will be a lot of parks'. Suggestion: fix adjective choice, word order, determiners, and future tense phrasing.

× Yes, in the future I would like to visit parks in Singapore because it is has a lot of green areas and just comfortable space and the other perhaps in Japan as well.

✓ Yes, in the future I would like to visit parks in Singapore because it has a lot of green areas and comfortable spaces, and perhaps others in Japan as well.

Remove redundant 'is' before 'has'. Use 'it has' to describe Singapore. 'Comfortable space' should be pluralized to 'comfortable spaces' or 'comfortable space' depending on meaning; 'others in Japan' clarifies additional parks. 'Would like' is correct modal use for polite future desire. Suggestion: remove redundancy, ensure subject-verb agreement, and choose appropriate plural forms.