Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I did / No, I didn't), then give one or two brief specific reasons or a short example. Avoid asking back or using incorrect grammar (e.g. use singular/plural correctly and proper word order).

Example: Yes, I liked going to parks as a child because they had fun playgrounds and I could play with friends. For example, we used to spend hours on the swings and have picnics under the trees.

Suggestion: Use a clear topic sentence and correct verb forms. Say how often you go and give one specific reason. Keep it concise and use linking words like 'but' or 'because' properly. Correct pronouns and possessives (e.g. 'my mother').

Example: Sometimes I go to the park with my mother and brother, but not often because I have to study. When I do go, we usually walk or sit and talk together.

Suggestion: Answer directly and remove unclear phrases. Use specific benefits and logical linking words. Avoid incorrect vocabulary ('improve people swimming' unclear). Keep within 3–4 sentences and use cohesive devices (for example, because, therefore).

Example: Yes, I would like more small parks because they provide green space and places for people to relax. For example, families could have picnics and children would have a safe area to play, which would make the city feel more lively.

Suggestion: Give a clear, complete answer: name the park and explain briefly why with correct grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid broken sentences. Mention a specific detail you expect to see to make the answer more vivid.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit Renmin Park in Beijing because my father told me it is very large and beautiful. I especially want to see the gardens and the lake that he described.

× Yes or no? Because I think child are very crazy.

✓ Yes. Because I think children are very crazy.

The sentence uses 'child' (singular) with plural verb 'are' and is missing correct pronoun/number. This is a singular/plural mismatch and incorrect noun form. Change 'child' to plural 'children' to agree with 'are'. Also 'Yes or no?' is inappropriate as a response to the question; a simple 'Yes' fits. Suggestion: Use 'child' for singular with 'is' or 'children' with 'are'.

× Sometimes I will with my mommy and my brother go to park, but sometimes my I have to study.

✓ Sometimes I go to the park with my mommy and my brother, but sometimes I have to study.

The original mixes future auxiliary 'will' unnecessarily and has wrong word order and article use. Replace 'will ... go' with simple present 'go' for habitual action. Insert the article 'the' before 'park'. Remove the extra 'my' before 'I'. Suggestion: Use simple present for routines and keep subject-verb order: 'I go to the park with...'.

× I would like to see more small parks in the city because they provide green space and improve people swimming, for example. Parts give families a place to relax and children somewhere safe to play, which makes the city feel more lively and present.

✓ I would like to see more small parks in the city because they provide green space and improve people’s well-being, for example. Parks give families a place to relax and children somewhere safe to play, which makes the city feel more lively and pleasant.

There are several issues: 'improve people swimming' is ungrammatical — likely intended 'improve people's well-being' or 'encourage people to go swimming'. 'Parts' is a typo for 'Parks'. 'Present' is the wrong adjective; 'pleasant' fits context. Replace incorrect quantifier/possessive by possessive form 'people’s'. Suggestion: Use correct noun 'parks', possessive 'people’s', and choose an adjective that matches meaning ('pleasant').

× I think so. Renmin Park in Beijing, because I always say my dad, he says it's very big and beautiful, so I want to see it.

✓ Yes. Renmin Park in Beijing, because my dad always says it's very big and beautiful, so I want to see it.

The sentence has awkward pronoun and clause order: 'I always say my dad' is incorrect. Use 'my dad always says' or 'I always hear my dad say'. Also add a clear response 'Yes.' for the question. Suggestion: Keep the speaker as subject for 'I' statements and position 'my dad' as subject when reporting his speech: 'my dad always says'. Also join clauses clearly with commas or conjunctions.