Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammar, verb tenses and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, use correct past forms, and avoid repetition. Add one specific detail (what you did) and link ideas with a short connector.

Example: Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child. I often went there with my friends to play football and climb trees, so we spent most afternoons running around. Because the parks were close to my home, I could go there almost every day after school.

Suggestion: Reduce fillers and repetition, use more natural phrasing and correct verb agreement. Start with a direct topic sentence, explain why parks help your mood, and give a specific example or frequency using linking words (for example, because, so).

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they help me relax. When I feel stressed or low, I usually take a short walk there in the evening, and the fresh air and greenery always lift my spirits.

Suggestion: Make the response more concise and grammatical. State your opinion clearly, support it with one reason, and use linking words (however, because). Avoid double negatives and awkward phrasing.

Example: I don't think we need many more parks in the city because there is limited space for new green areas. However, it would be helpful to improve and maintain the existing parks so they are more accessible to everyone.

Suggestion: Give a clear, full sentence and add a brief reason or detail about why you want to visit that park. Use correct word order and a linking phrase to expand your answer naturally.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit Shah Buddeen Park in West Dhaka because I have heard it has a large lake and beautiful walking paths, so it seems like a peaceful place to relax on weekends.

× I like to go to parks as a child.

✓ I liked going to parks as a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'I like' with the past time reference 'as a child'. Use past tense 'liked' and the gerund 'going' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: use 'I liked going to parks when I was a child.'

× When I was a kid I often go to the parks and play played with friend with my children friends.

✓ When I was a kid, I often went to the parks and played with my friends.

This sentence contains incorrect verb forms and word order. 'Often go' should be past 'often went' to match 'When I was a kid'. Use simple past 'went' and 'played'. 'Play played' is redundant; use one past verb. 'Friend with my children friends' is incorrect; use 'my friends'. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense and correct noun plural 'friends'. Also remove repeated words.

× I enjoyed to play with them.

✓ I enjoyed playing with them.

'Enjoy' is followed by a gerund, not the infinitive. Use 'enjoyed playing' instead of 'enjoyed to play'. Also maintain past tense to match previous sentences.

× Yes, obviously I like to go to the park.

✓ Yes, I still like going to the park.

The examiner asked about current habits, so use present simple continuous/habit form. 'Still' clarifies continuation from childhood. Prefer 'like going' instead of 'like to go' for natural speech; both are grammatical but 'like going' fits context better.

× Umm, When I go to the park, I really feel fresh.

✓ When I go to the park, I really feel refreshed.

Use the adjective 'refreshed' to describe feeling renewed. 'Feel fresh' is possible but 'feel refreshed' is more natural in this context.

× Sometimes I really feel depressed at that time.

✓ Sometimes I feel really down when I am there.

The original mixes adverbs and time phrases awkwardly. 'At that time' is vague; 'when I am there' clarifies. 'Depressed' is a strong clinical term; 'feel down' is a more natural everyday expression if intended. Maintain present simple for habitual feelings.

× I go to the park and my mind get very, very, very refreshed.

✓ I go to the park and my mind gets very, very, very refreshed.

Subject-verb agreement: singular subject 'my mind' requires 'gets'. Also 'refreshed' is appropriate. Keep present simple for habitual action.

× Actually, we have many parks in our city right now.

✓ Actually, we have many parks in our city.

The phrase 'right now' is unnecessary with present simple and can be omitted. There's no modal error strictly, but sentence is acceptable; correction removes redundancy. Suggestion: keep concise present simple.

× I don't think so that we need many parks in our city because we don't have many places for make parks.

✓ I don't think we need more parks in our city because we don't have many places to build them.

The structure 'I don't think so that' is incorrect; use 'I don't think we need'. Also use 'more parks' rather than 'many parks' when comparing need. 'Places for make parks' is ungrammatical; use 'places to build them' or 'space to make them'. Suggestion: use infinitive 'to build' and pronoun 'them' to refer to parks.

× I want to go to the Shah Buddeen Park the situated in the West Dhaka.

✓ I want to go to Shah Buddeen Park, which is situated in West Dhaka.

Definite article 'the' before 'situated' is incorrect. Use a relative clause 'which is situated'. Do not use 'the West Dhaka'; use 'West Dhaka' or 'the west of Dhaka'. Also remove extra 'the' before park name unless the park's official name includes 'the'. Suggestion: use proper noun formatting and a relative clause for location.