Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the answer grammatically correct, more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense mistakes and add one specific detail about activities or a memory. Avoid redundancy.

Example: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. I often visited the local park to run around and play fetch with my dog, and sometimes my family would have picnics there on weekends.

Suggestion: Use a more natural negative response and avoid filler sounds. Give a reason and one concrete example of what you prefer to do instead. Keep it to one or two supporting sentences linked with a connector.

Example: Not really, I rarely go to parks now because I prefer indoor activities like reading or going to the gym. For example, I usually exercise at a fitness center rather than jogging outside.

Suggestion: Be concise and correct grammar (there are/there is). Provide a specific reason and one expected benefit for residents. Use a linking phrase for clarity.

Example: Yes, I would. There are very few green spaces in my city, so creating more parks would give residents places to exercise and relax, which could improve public health and community life.

Suggestion: Avoid repetition and correct grammar (no any → no). Give a brief elaboration or one possible exception to show nuance. Keep it short and natural.

Example: No, I don't have any specific parks I plan to visit because I don't enjoy outdoor activities much. However, I might visit a park if friends invited me or there was a special event there.

× Yes, I have to say, when I was a child I often visit a park to exercise as well as play with my dog.

✓ Yes, I have to say, when I was a child I often visited a park to exercise and to play with my dog.

The sentence describes repeated actions in the past, so the simple past tense 'visited' should be used instead of the present 'visit'. Also, 'as well as' is acceptable but using 'and to' clarifies parallel infinitives for 'exercise' and 'play'. Suggestion: use simple past for habitual past actions and keep parallel structure for verbs.

× MMM, absolutely no, because I'm not a big fan of the outdoor activity. As a result, I seldom visit a park now.

✓ MMM, absolutely not, because I'm not a big fan of outdoor activities. As a result, I seldom visit parks now.

'Absolutely no' is not the correct adverbial response; 'absolutely not' is idiomatic. 'The outdoor activity' is incorrect: 'outdoor activities' should be plural and without 'the' to refer generally. Since the speaker rarely goes to parks in general, plural 'parks' fits better. Suggestion: use 'absolutely not' for strong negation and use plural nouns without 'the' for general statements.

× Yes, because in my city there's only few green place for a citizen to exercise.

✓ Yes, because in my city there are only a few green places for citizens to exercise.

After 'there' use 'are' for plural ('places') not 'is'. 'Few' with a countable noun normally needs the article 'a few' for a positive meaning. Also 'place' should be plural 'places' and 'a citizen' is better as plural 'citizens' to refer generally. Suggestion: use 'there are', 'a few', plural noun forms for general statements.

× So if there if there's more place for residents to exercise and I think it is better for them.

✓ So if there were more places for residents to exercise, I think it would be better for them.

The original has repetition 'there if' and mixes conditional forms. For a hypothetical situation about increasing places, use a conditional structure: 'If there were more places... I think it would be better...' Also use plural 'places'. Suggestion: remove duplicate words and use appropriate conditional tense (second conditional) for unlikely or hypothetical present situations.

× No, as I mentioned, I'm not a big fan of outdoor activities, so there's no any parks that I want to visit in my future.

✓ No, as I mentioned, I'm not a big fan of outdoor activities, so there are no parks that I want to visit in the future.

'There's no any parks' is ungrammatical: use 'there are no parks' for plural. 'In my future' is awkward; use 'in the future'. Also ensure subject-verb agreement: 'there are' for plural 'parks'. Suggestion: use 'there are no [plural noun]' and 'in the future' for standard phrasing.