Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Focus on correct grammar (past tense and subject agreement), clear topic sentence, and concise supporting details. Start with a direct past-tense statement, then add one or two specific memories using linking words (e.g., "because," "and"). Avoid irrelevant or contradictory sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child because they were spacious and shady. I used to go with my family and sister, and we often played hide-and-seek and fed ducks near the pond.

Suggestion: Give a clear present-tense opinion, explain reasons with linking words, and be specific about which factors put you off (distance, weather). Correct common errors: use "because it is/they are" and "too hot". Keep it concise (1–3 sentences).

Example: Not really; I rarely go to parks now because they are too far from my house and it is often very hot there. For these reasons, I prefer to exercise at home or visit nearby cafés.

Suggestion: Answer directly (yes/no) and justify your opinion with clear, specific reasons. Use linking words like "because" or "however." Correct phrasing: "I wouldn't" or "I don't want to" and say what you mean by "be there right now." Keep to 1–3 sentences.

Example: I would like to see more parks in the city because they provide green space and places to relax. However, I am often too busy to visit them, so I would prefer small local parks close to my home.

Suggestion: Start with a clear future-tense statement and add specific plans or activities. Use correct grammar: "I would like to go to parks with my husband and family." Mention one or two activities you want to do and use linking words (e.g., "for example," "so"). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Example: In the future, I would like to go to parks with my husband and our children. For example, we could have picnics and play games together, which would be a nice family activity.

× I like to going to the park as a child because he was so cool.

✓ I liked going to the park as a child because it was so cool.

Errors: 'like to going' mixes infinitive and -ing form; when talking about childhood the past tense 'liked' is required; 'he' incorrectly refers to the park and should be 'it'. Suggestion: Use past tense 'liked' for past habits and 'going' (verb+ing) or 'to go' (not both). Use correct pronoun 'it' for a park. Grammar problem type IDs: 5 (Past tense issue), 8 (Verb + -ing form), 12 (Incorrect use of pronouns).

× I won't go there.

✓ I didn't go there.

Context requires past tense to describe childhood experience, not future negative 'won't'. Use 'didn't go' to express not going in the past. Suggestion: Match verb tense to the time being discussed. Grammar problem type ID: 5 (Past tense issue).

× I was go with my family, with my sister and I played some games.

✓ I went with my family, with my sister, and I played some games.

Use simple past 'went' rather than 'was go'. Also include commas for clarity. 'I' usage is correct here. Suggestion: For past actions use past simple verbs: 'I went', 'I played'. Grammar problem type ID: 5 (Past tense issue).

× Honestly I'm I don't want to go to the park because it is so far to my house I don't want it and so hot in my park.

✓ Honestly, I don't want to go to the park because it is so far from my house and it is very hot there.

Errors: extra 'I'm' is unnecessary; incorrect preposition 'to my house' should be 'from my house'; 'I don't want it' is awkward—refer to the park as 'there'; 'in my park' is wrong contextually. Suggestion: Remove redundant words, use correct prepositions ('far from'), and refer to locations with 'there' or 'it'. Grammar problem type IDs: 6 (Present tense issue), 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions), 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs).'

× I don't want to see because I want to be there right now.

✓ I don't want to see more parks because I want to be there right now.

Original omitted 'more parks' referenced in the question. 'Don't want to see' is awkward but acceptable; ensure object is present. Suggestion: Repeat 'more parks' for clarity and keep present tense 'don't want' because speaking about current preference. Grammar problem type ID: 26 (Sentence structure errors).

× Many many works I got to do.

✓ I have a lot of work to do.

'Many many works' is ungrammatical; use 'a lot of work' or 'many tasks'. 'I got to do' is informal and ungrammatical here—use 'I have to do'. Suggestion: Use 'I have a lot of work to do' for clear, grammatically correct present obligation. Grammar problem type IDs: 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs), 14 (Incorrect use of quantifiers).

× I would go to the parks with my husband.

✓ I will go to the park with my husband.

Use 'will' to express future intention; singular/plural 'parks' should match context—'the park' or 'parks' depending on meaning; more natural: 'go to the park' or 'visit parks'. Suggestion: Use 'will' for future plans and choose singular/plural consistently. Grammar problem type IDs: 7 (Future tense issue), 1 (Singular and plural issue).

× Yeah, with my husband in the future, I want go with my family, with my new family, like play, play a game.

✓ Yes, in the future I want to go with my family, with my new family, to play games.

Errors: missing 'to' before 'go' ('want to go'); repetitive 'play, play' should be singular 'play games'; restructure word order for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'want to' + base verb and a clear infinitive 'to play games'. Grammar problem type IDs: 8 (Verb + -ing form) for 'play' usage, 26 (Sentence structure errors).

× I want that.

✓ I want that.

Grammatically the sentence is short but acceptable; however, 'that' is vague. Suggestion: Specify what 'that' refers to: 'I want that for my family' or 'I want that experience.' Grammar problem type ID: 12 (Incorrect use of pronouns).