Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using correct tenses and linking words. Avoid repetition and fix common errors (e.g., 'love to going' → 'loved going', 'I really love hang out' → 'I really liked hanging out').

Example: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. For example, I often played on the swings and explored nature trails with my friends, which made weekends exciting and active.

Suggestion: Answer directly, correct tense and sentence structure, and use linking words to organize ideas. Replace vague phrases with specific examples and complete sentences. Limit to maximum five sentences and avoid repeating the examiner's words unnecessarily.

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. For instance, I often go there to have a picnic or meet friends, and I like playing on the swings and walking around the playground to relax.

Suggestion: Give a direct opinion, avoid unrelated or confusing statements (e.g., 'love going to the pubs' is irrelevant), and support your view with clear reasons using linking words (e.g., 'because', 'however'). Use correct vocabulary ('prefer' not 'rather love') and correct grammar.

Example: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide safe places for children to play and for families to relax. However, it may be difficult because the city is small and land is limited.

Suggestion: Respond clearly and use proper verb forms (e.g., 'I haven't thought about' not 'haven't thinking'). Offer a specific example of a park you would like to visit and explain why, using linking words and complete sentences. Avoid trailing off—finish your thought with a concrete detail.

Example: I haven't decided on a specific park yet, but I would like to visit a large, safe park that offers sports facilities and picnic areas so I and my best friend can play games and relax together.

× Of course, as a child I really love to going to the parks to now I still like going to the park because there's a lot of activities I can do there and I really love hang out with my friends to the park this weekend.

✓ Of course, as a child I really loved going to parks; even now I still like going to the park because there are a lot of activities I can do there, and I really love hanging out with my friends at the park on weekends.

The student mixes present and past tenses and has incorrect verb forms. 'As a child' requires past tense 'loved' (present tense issue). 'Love to going' is incorrect; use 'loved going' or 'love going'. 'There's a lot' should be 'there are a lot' because 'activities' is plural (singular and plural issue but corrected under tense context). 'Love hang out' requires gerund: 'love hanging out'. Preposition 'to the park' when indicating meeting/place should be 'at the park'. Also 'this weekend' changed to 'on weekends' to fit general habit. Suggestion: keep tense consistent (past for childhood, present for current habits), use correct verb forms (base, -ing) and correct prepositions for location.

× As I said before, I still enjoy going to the parks because I could play on the swings and explore the playground and I really enjoy going now since there are many activities I can do there such as having a picnic or meeting friends to relax and have a small.

✓ As I said before, I still enjoy going to parks because I can play on the swings and explore the playground, and I enjoy going now since there are many activities I can do there, such as having a picnic or meeting friends to relax and have a small gathering.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'could' when describing present ability; use 'can' for present tense (present tense issue). 'Going to the parks' can be 'going to parks' (article/number choice) but main error is modal/past vs present. Also the sentence ended with 'have a small' which is incomplete; 'have a small gathering' or 'have a snack' completes the idea. Suggestion: use 'can' for present abilities, choose complete noun phrases and keep parallel structure.

× Yes, of course I will love to see more parks in my city. As I said be before I am person that rather love going to the pubs, so I would like my city to explore new parks for children around here. But I think it's quite hard for my city because my city is quite small.

✓ Yes, of course I would love to see more parks in my city. As I said before, I am a person who prefers going to pubs, so I would like my city to create more parks for children around here. But I think it is quite difficult for my city because it is quite small.

'I will love' is unnatural for a wish; use 'I would love' (future/conditional issue). 'As I said be before' has typos; correct to 'As I said before'. 'I am person that rather love' has multiple errors: missing article 'a person', incorrect comparative expression 'rather love' should be 'prefer'. 'Going to the pubs' is fine but context suggests preference; use 'prefers going to pubs'. 'Explore new parks' is odd for a city; 'create more parks' is clearer. Repetition 'my city' replaced with 'it' to avoid redundancy. Suggestion: use conditional for polite wishes, include articles, and use appropriate verbs for meaning.

× I haven't thinking about what perks that I would love go to in the future, but for me in the future I would like to go to a safe places to play and there's a lot of activities can can do with my best friend like.

✓ I haven't thought about which parks I would like to go to in the future, but I would like to go to a safe place to play where there are many activities I can do with my best friend.

'Haven't thinking' is incorrect; after 'have' use past participle 'thought' (verb in the past participle form). 'Perks' is a misspelling of 'parks'. 'Would love go to' needs 'to' after 'love' or better 'would like to go to'. 'A safe places' mixes singular and plural; use 'a safe place' or 'safe places'. 'There's a lot of activities can can do' has several issues: use 'there are many activities I can do' and remove duplicate 'can'. The sentence fragment 'like' at the end is incomplete and removed. Suggestion: use correct auxiliary+past participle after 'have', correct noun spellings, ensure subject-verb number agreement, and avoid duplicated words.