Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the response grammatically correct, more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid redundant phrasing (e.g., “when before elementary school”).

Example: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. For example, before I started elementary school I often spent whole afternoons there playing on the swings and exploring with my friends.

Suggestion: Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and make the timeline clear. Give a concise topic sentence about current habits, then one specific supporting detail linked with a connector like “usually” or “however.” Avoid contradictory phrases in one sentence.

Example: I don't go to parks very often nowadays. Usually I visit parks only when I play basketball with my younger brothers in my free time.

Suggestion: Provide a clear reasoned answer with accurate vocabulary and grammar. Start with a direct opinion, then give specific reasons linked with words like “because” or “since.” Fix word choice errors (e.g., “parts” → “parks”, “area isn't that well” → “city is not very green”).

Example: Yes, I would, because my city is not very green. Building more parks would improve the environment and give people pleasant places to relax on weekends.

Suggestion: Answer directly and add one specific, personal reason using linking words like “because” or “since.” Fix small grammar issues (e.g., “the Central Park” → “Central Park”; “I saw it from” → “I saw it in”).

Example: I would love to visit Central Park in New York because I saw it in the Spider-Man movie and was impressed by its size and lively atmosphere.

× Yes, I was, when before elementary school I spent a whole afternoon in parks very often.

✓ Yes, I was. Before elementary school, I spent whole afternoons in parks very often.

The original sentence mixes clauses and uses commas incorrectly; the main issue is present tense context and sentence structure (Grammar Problem Type 6 and 26). Use 'was' as short answer then start a new sentence 'Before elementary school, I spent whole afternoons in parks very often.' This corrects awkward phrasing and punctuation and matches past time reference.

× Right now I just doesn't go to parks.

✓ Right now I just don't go to parks.

Use do/does with do-support in present simple. For first person singular 'I', the auxiliary is don't, not doesn't (Grammar Problem Type 2). Replace doesn't with don't to agree with the subject.

× I go to parks usually with my little brothers or I will go to basketball parks in my free time to play basketball.

✓ I usually go to parks with my little brothers, or I go to basketball parks in my free time to play basketball.

Mixing present simple and future 'will' here is inconsistent. Use present simple 'go' for habitual actions (Grammar Problem Type 6). Also move adverb 'usually' before the verb for natural adverb placement.

× Yes I would. I think my city's area isn't that well.

✓ Yes, I would. I think my city's green space isn't that good.

'Well' is an adverb and cannot modify a noun phrase 'area'; use adjective 'good' or a noun phrase like 'green space' to convey meaning (Grammar Problem Type 13). Also 'city's area' is vague; 'green space' or 'parks' is clearer.

× Building more parts will definitely help the environment and let us have a place to go when weekends coming.

✓ Building more parks will definitely help the environment and give us places to go on weekends.

Spelling: 'parts' should be 'parks'. The clause 'when weekends coming' is ungrammatical; use 'on weekends' or 'when weekends come' (Grammar Problem Type 26). Also 'let us have a place' is awkward—'give us places' is clearer.

× I really want to go to the Central Park in New York.

✓ I really want to go to Central Park in New York.

Use the proper name 'Central Park' without the definite article 'the' (Grammar Problem Type 10 and 17). Proper names of parks normally omit 'the'.

× I saw it from the Spider-Man movie and I dream to visit it one day.

✓ I saw it in the Spider-Man movie, and I dream of visiting it one day.

Use 'in' not 'from' to indicate appearance in a movie (Grammar Problem Type 11). Also 'dream' is followed by the preposition 'of' plus gerund 'visiting' (Grammar Problem Types 9 and 10). Change 'to visit' to 'visiting' and add 'of'.