Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clear and relevant to the question. Start with a direct topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct tenses and simple linking words (for example, 'because' or 'and') and avoid irrelevant words like 'work' if you mean 'park.' Keep it under five sentences.

Example: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. My local park was close to my house, so I visited it almost every day. I usually spent about two hours there playing games and walking with my friends because we enjoyed the open space and fresh air.

Suggestion: Answer directly and naturally, use present simple or present continuous correctly, and add a brief reason with a linking word. Be concise and avoid repeating identical details from previous answers.

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I usually spend around two hours there, exercising and relaxing, because it helps me stay fit and clear my mind.

Suggestion: Make your point clear and organized. Start with a direct opinion (yes or no) then give one or two specific reasons using linking words ('because', 'so', 'however'). Avoid unclear phrases ('parking', 'one person a day', 'location of the work') and incorrect grammar. Keep sentences short and precise.

Example: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because they provide green spaces for everyone. Different parks attract different people, so having more options would let me try new places and meet more friends.

Suggestion: Be specific about which park or type of park you want to visit and why. Use future tense correctly (will/would). Give a clear time reference and one reason or activity. Avoid vague or incorrect dates and awkward phrasing.

Example: Yes, I want to visit a new botanical park that is currently under construction near my neighbourhood. Once it opens next year, I will go there regularly to exercise and enjoy the variety of plants and peaceful paths.

× Yes, when I was a child so I regularly go to work.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I regularly went to the park.

The speaker refers to past habitual action 'when I was a child', so the past tense should be used ('went' not 'go'). Also 'work' is contextually wrong; likely meant 'park'. Use simple past for past habits and choose the correct noun. Suggestion: use 'I regularly went to the park' for past habitual actions.

× So this work is situated near to my house so I regularly go there and spend 2 hours in daily basis because I'm doing some exercise and also some walks with friends and some.

✓ The park is located near my house, so I regularly go there and spend about two hours each day exercising and walking with friends.

Mixed and incorrect tenses and awkward phrasing. Use simple present for habitual actions ('is located', 'regularly go', 'spend'). 'Near to' is incorrect; use 'near' or 'near my house'. 'In daily basis' is ungrammatical; use 'each day' or 'every day'. 'I'm doing some exercise' should be 'exercising' for parallel structure. Remove trailing 'and some'. Suggestion: keep consistent simple present and use natural adverbials like 'each day'.

× Yes, because I go regularly into the park so I spend 2 hours and do some exercise and rest so I come back home.

✓ Yes, I go to the park regularly, spend two hours exercising and resting, and then I return home.

Use consistent simple present for routines ('go', 'spend', 'return'). 'Go regularly into the park' is awkward; use 'go to the park regularly'. 'Come back home' is better as 'return home'. Use commas to link coordinated actions. Suggestion: maintain consistent verb form and natural prepositions.

× Yes, in my city there are lots of parking.

✓ Yes, in my city there are lots of parks.

'Parking' is uncountable or refers to parking facilities; the intended plural countable noun is 'parks'. Use 'parks' to indicate multiple park areas. Suggestion: use correct plural noun 'parks'.

× Parks are available so different types of peoples are coming.

✓ Parks are available, and people of different types come to them.

'Peoples' is incorrect when referring to groups of people in general; use 'people'. 'Different types of people' or 'people of different ages/backgrounds' is clearer. Use present simple for habitual action ('come'). Suggestion: replace 'peoples' with 'people' and rephrase for clarity.

× So I regularly going to want to and so I go around nearly in one person a day but sometime when I spend much more times into one part so I regularly change the location of the work and go to another park.

✓ I regularly want to go, and I usually visit one park a day. Sometimes I stay longer in one park, so I change locations and go to a different park.

The original has incorrect verb forms ('going to want to'), wrong prepositions ('in one person a day'), and vague phrases. Use simple present for habits ('want', 'usually visit'). 'Spend much more times into one part' should be 'stay longer in one park'. 'Change the location of the work' is unclear; likely 'change locations' or 'go to a different park'. Suggestion: break into shorter sentences, use simple present, correct prepositions ('in' -> 'in a park'), and use clear expressions.

× Yes, in the future, so there are many folks are available, but they are also under construction.

✓ Yes, in the future there will be many parks available, but some are currently under construction.

Talking about future availability requires future tense ('will be'). 'Folks' is informal and doesn't mean 'parks'; use 'parks'. Also combine present progressive for current construction ('are under construction'). Suggestion: use 'will be' for future predictions and correct noun 'parks'.

× So after that in the future around 2020 thirty.

✓ They should be finished around 2023 or 2030.

The original time expression 'around 2020 thirty' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use a clear year or range. If the intended year is 2030, write '2030'. Use future tense context if predicting completion. Suggestion: state a clear year like 'around 2030' and ensure the number is correct.

× So I regularly go there and also do some exercise to put your health.

✓ I will regularly go there and exercise to improve my health.

Mixed person and tense: 'put your health' is incorrect; intended meaning likely 'improve my health'. If discussing future plans, use future form ('will go') or 'plan to go'. Also use 'exercise' as a verb and 'improve my health' as the goal. Suggestion: use consistent subject and tense and correct collocation 'improve health'.