Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammar (verb forms, articles, prepositions) and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add a short specific detail. Avoid redundancy and keep it within 3–4 sentences. Use linking words like 'because' or 'and' to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I loved going to the park as a child. Every weekend my mother would take me there, and I spent hours playing games with my friends. I particularly remember enjoying picnics and the swings because they were fun and social.

Suggestion: Work on tense consistency and clearer expression. Use a topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid unclear phrases like 'even sometime I went back for my evening box' and choose correct verbs (refresh, regain).

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks whenever I have free time. I often visit in the evenings because a short walk in the park refreshes me and helps me regain my energy after work.

Suggestion: Use plural/singular correctly and make ideas concise. Begin with a direct answer, then give a specific reason with linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Replace vague phrases like 'visited repeatedly 1 by 1' with clearer descriptions.

Example: Yes, I would definitely like to see more parks in my city because there are only a few in my hometown. As a result I often visit the same parks repeatedly, and they help me relax and recharge.

Suggestion: Make sentences concise and correct grammar (use articles, relative clauses, and proper word order). Start with a clear statement, then give specific details about the park (location, features) using linking words like 'and' or 'which'. Avoid repetition such as 'very beautiful' twice.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit a famous park in Vadodara in the future. I have heard it has large green areas, rides and a small zoo, which sounds fascinating and perfect for a weekend visit.

× Yes, I like to going to to the park.

✓ Yes, I liked going to the park.

The student used an incorrect verb form and extra preposition. The question asked about childhood (past), so the verb should be past tense 'liked'. Remove the extra 'to' and use the gerund 'going' after 'liked' or use 'like to go' in present contexts. Suggestion: use 'liked going' for past preference or 'like to go' for present preference.

× When I was child on every weekend my mother used to take me park and I really enjoy with playing with my friends.

✓ When I was a child, every weekend my mother used to take me to the park, and I really enjoyed playing with my friends.

Missing article 'a' before 'child' and missing 'to' before 'the park'. The time frame is past, so 'enjoy' should be past 'enjoyed'. Also remove the unnecessary preposition 'with' before 'playing'. Suggestions: include articles ('a child'), use 'take me to the park', and match past tense verbs ('used to', 'enjoyed').

× Yes, I still prefer to go in a park where whenever I get time even sometime I went back for my evening box and it we refreshed me and reneged my energy.

✓ Yes, I still prefer to go to a park whenever I have time; sometimes I go back in the evening for a walk and it refreshes me and renews my energy.

Use 'go to a park' (preposition 'to'). The clause refers to habitual present, so use present tense 'have', 'go', 'refreshes', 'renews'. 'Went back' is past and conflicts with 'still prefer'; change to 'go back' or 'go'. 'Evening box' is unclear; likely 'evening walk'. 'Reneged' is incorrect word choice; use 'renewed' to mean restore energy. Suggestions: keep consistent present tense for habits and choose correct prepositions and verbs.

× Yes, definitely I would like to see more park in our cities but in my hometown there are only few parks so I visited repeatedly 1 by 1 and it's also helped me to get relaxed and regenerate my energy.

✓ Yes, definitely I would like to see more parks in our cities, but in my hometown there are only a few parks, so I visited them repeatedly one by one, and they also helped me to relax and regenerate my energy.

Use plural 'parks' after 'more'. Add article 'a' before 'few'. 'Visited repeatedly 1 by 1' should be 'visited them repeatedly one by one'. Maintain past tense 'visited' paired with 'helped'. Use 'helped me to relax' or 'helped me relax'. Suggestions: correct article use, pluralize where needed, and choose clear phrases instead of numerals.

× Yes, I hear very there is a very beautiful park situated in the Vadodara and I would like to go in a future and it's a very beautiful greenery park and have also a ride inside it and also a zoo theme which will very fascinated me.

✓ Yes, I heard there is a very beautiful park in Vadodara and I would like to visit it in the future. It is a very green park; it also has rides and a zoo area which would fascinate me.

Use past 'heard' or 'have heard' instead of 'hear very there'. Drop the article 'the' before 'Vadodara' for city names. Use 'visit it in the future' for planned action. 'Greenery park' is incorrect adjective order; use 'green park'. 'Have also a ride' should be 'it also has rides'. 'A zoo theme' unclear; use 'a zoo area'. 'Will very fascinated me' incorrect modal and verb form; use 'would fascinate me' for conditional/future-in-the-future context. Suggestions: use correct verb tense for reported information, correct article use with city names, fix adjective order, and use proper modal + verb forms.