Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more accurate with grammar (use past tense), reduce fillers (uh), organize into a clear topic sentence plus one or two supporting details, and keep within 3–4 sentences. Use linking words for clarity (for example, “because” or “so”).

Example: Yes. I loved going to parks as a child because my father often took me twice a week. We would play on the swings and explore the playground, which made me very happy. Those visits were a highlight of my week.

Suggestion: Use correct word order and verb forms (e.g., “I still like going to parks”), avoid listing without connectors, and be concise. Group related activities and use linking words like “for example” or “because” to show reasons.

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I usually go with my friends to play cricket and run for exercise, which helps me stay healthy. For example, we often play for an hour and then do stretches on the grass.

Suggestion: Clarify the idea and avoid unclear references (e.g., “puppy park from Korea” and “the scenario”). Give one clear reason and one specific example, using correct verb forms and fewer hesitations.

Example: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because we need more green spaces for recreation. For example, I would love a dog-friendly park like the popular puppy parks in Korea, where people can walk their pets and socialize safely.

Suggestion: Use correct tense and more precise descriptions (for example, “I would like to visit”); avoid repetition and hesitations. Add one reason why you want to visit to make the answer specific and convincing.

Example: In the future, I would like to visit Iqbal Park in Lahore because it is one of Pakistan’s largest parks and has historic sites and wide open spaces for walking and picnics.

× As a child, I love to go park because I, uh, because my father go with me, uh, in a week, twice in a week and I enjoy the park so happily and uh, and take swings.

✓ As a child, I loved going to the park because my father went with me twice a week, and I enjoyed the park very much and swung on the swings.

The sentence describes past habitual actions, so present tense verbs (love, go, enjoy, take) should be changed to past tense (loved, went, enjoyed, swung). Also use 'going to the park' and 'the park' with the definite article, and 'twice a week' is the correct adverbial phrase. Avoid filler words and repeated connectors for clarity.

× Yes, still I like to go park because me and my friends go to park and play cricket there and running there and get good health and, and most of the time I take swings there and, uh, take some exercises.

✓ Yes, I still like to go to the park because my friends and I go to the park to play cricket, run, and stay healthy. Most of the time I use the swings and do some exercises there.

Use subject pronoun order 'my friends and I' rather than 'me and my friends'. 'Go to the park' requires the preposition to. Use parallel verb forms ('play', 'run', 'stay') and avoid repeating 'there'. 'Take swings' is better as 'use the swings' and 'take some exercises' should be 'do some exercises.'

× Yes, I like to visiting parks in my city, uh, the most popular part puppy park from Korea, umm, my dream park to visit here, but umm, uh, I cannot visit uh, actually the scenario.

✓ Yes, I like visiting parks in my city. The most popular park I want to visit is Puppy Park in Korea; it is my dream park, but I cannot visit it at the moment.

After 'like' use the gerund 'visiting' (or the infinitive 'to visit') consistently; 'like to visiting' is incorrect. 'Part' should be 'park'. Use 'Puppy Park in Korea' as a proper noun and add 'it' as the object of 'visit'. 'At the moment' clarifies inability; 'scenario' is not appropriate here.

× In future, I like to go Islamic Ball International Park Lahore because it is a huge part of Pakistan and uh, it is uh, it is a good to visiting here.

✓ In the future, I would like to go to the Islamic Ball International Park in Lahore because it is a large park in Pakistan, and it would be great to visit it.

When talking about future desires, use 'would like to' for politeness and intention. Use 'go to' with the preposition. 'Part' should be 'park' and 'huge' can be 'large' or 'huge'; 'it is a good to visiting here' is ungrammatical—use 'it would be great to visit it.' Also include 'in' before the city name and use the definite article 'the' for a named park.