Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Give a direct, complete topic sentence and add one brief supporting detail. Use correct verb forms and small linking words if needed. Keep it under 3–4 short sentences. For example, start with “Yes, I liked going to parks as a child because…” and then give a specific reason (a memory or activity).

Example: Yes, I liked going to parks as a child because they made me happy. For example, I enjoyed feeding the ducks and playing on the swings with my friends.

Suggestion: Use correct tense and clearer sentence structure. Begin with a topic sentence about now, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words like “because” and “for example” correctly. Avoid repetition and finish the sentence fully.

Example: Yes, I still like going to parks because I exercise there every day. For example, I usually jog for 30 minutes and then chat with neighbours, which makes me feel relaxed.

Suggestion: Clarify the main idea and correct word choice (park, not pork). Start with a clear opinion sentence and give a reason with a specific benefit. Use linking words such as “because” or “so”. Keep it concise and grammatical.

Example: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide places to relax and exercise. If there were more parks, more people could enjoy outdoor activities and meet friends.

Suggestion: Provide a clear answer about future plans and name an example park or type of park you want to visit. Use future grammar (“I would like to” or “I want to”) and give one specific reason. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and avoid unclear words.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit a large botanical garden in the future because I enjoy seeing different plants and taking photos. For example, I hope to go to the city botanical park next spring to relax and learn about plants.

× Yes, I like because they make me happy.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks because they made me happy.

The response refers to childhood (past), so present tense 'like' is incorrect. Use past tense 'liked' and 'made' to match time reference. Also include 'going to parks' to mirror the question's activity for clarity. Suggestion: use past tense when talking about past habits or feelings.

× Yes, I like go to the park because I went to exercise every day and I saw so many people there are funny, happy and talk with friends a lot in the.

✓ Yes, I still like going to the park because I exercise there regularly and I see many people who are friendly, happy, and talking with their friends.

The student mixed tenses and incorrect verb forms. 'Like go' should be 'like going' (verb + -ing). 'I went to exercise every day' conflicts with present time; use present simple 'I exercise' or present continuous if ongoing. 'I saw so many people there are funny' is ungrammatical: use relative clause 'people who are friendly' or 'people who are funny'. Remove extra 'in the' at the end. Suggestion: keep present simple for habitual current actions and use 'going' after 'like'.

× Yes, I like pork. They have prayed to relax and have a lot of people come to. Pay Exercise.

✓ Yes, I would like more parks. They provide places to relax and many people come to exercise.

The original contains wrong words and pronouns: 'pork' instead of 'parks', 'they have prayed' is incorrect (wrong verb and form), and 'have a lot of people come to. Pay Exercise' is fragmented. Use 'they provide' to describe parks and 'people come to exercise' for purpose. Suggestion: choose correct nouns and verbs and form complete sentences.

× I like look so many poor someone is small or bigs and.

✓ I would like to visit many parks of different sizes, both small and large.

The sentence uses incorrect verb forms: 'I like look' should be 'I would like to look at' or 'I would like to visit'; 'po or someone' seems intended as 'parks' and 'bigs' should be 'big'. Also the structure is incomplete. Use 'would like to' for future desire and 'both small and large' for sizes. Suggestion: clarify nouns and use correct comparative adjectives and infinitive forms.