Parks— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Did you like going to parks as a child?
Candidate
I loved going to the park as a child because it was an opportunity for me to meet other children and make new friends in the playground. I never went there alone. My friend and I who lived nearby, who used to play Ludo there, and the most exciting part of it is that I always won.
Examiner
Do you still like going to parks now?
Candidate
Yes, I love going to parks now because it also a place where I can meet new people. Nowadays not only children but adults come to the park to clear off their mind and have fun. So it is exciting seeing my fellow adults do things that we always we used to do when we are children.
Examiner
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
Candidate
Yes, I would love to see more parks in my city. Currently we only have two parks and whenever I go there it is filled up with people. So having more parks will help to we help coaches.
Examiner
Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
Candidate
Yes, there is a park I want to go to in the future. It has the paintball court, which the warning my state doesn't have and I've love. I've been dreaming on her to play the game so This is why I want to go to the park.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Did you like going to parks as a child?
Score: 68.0Suggestion: Be more concise and correct sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid run-on sentences and unnecessary repetition. Use simple past consistently and correct relative clauses.
Example: Yes, I did. I loved going to the park as a child because I could meet other children and make friends. For example, a friend who lived nearby and I used to play Ludo on the benches after school, and I often won which made those visits very memorable.
Do you still like going to parks now?
Score: 62.0Suggestion: Correct grammar and tenses, and reduce repetition. Use linking words (for example, 'because', 'so', 'for instance') to make ideas clear. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and give a specific example of what adults do.
Example: Yes, I still enjoy parks because they are great places to meet people and relax. For example, many adults come to exercise or play games like badminton, which reminds me of the activities I liked as a child.
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: Clarify your reason and fix grammar and unclear phrasing. State one specific benefit of more parks (e.g., less crowding, more space for sports). Avoid fragments and explain 'coaches' if you mention them.
Example: Yes, I would. We only have two parks and they are often overcrowded, so more parks would reduce crowding and give coaches and sports groups more space to run training sessions.
Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
Score: 45.0Suggestion: Correct vocabulary and grammar, and be specific about the park and your reasons. Use 2–3 clear sentences: name the attraction, explain why it interests you, and give a short detail about when or with whom you would go.
Example: Yes — I want to visit a park that has a paintball court because there is no paintball facility in my state. I would like to try paintball with friends next summer because I enjoy team games and it sounds exciting.
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