Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Улучшите грамматику времени и согласование (используйте прошедшее время), сократите повторяющиеся фразы и добавьте конкретный пример. Используйте связки для плавности (например, “for example”, “also”, “so”).

Example: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child because they were places where I could run around and play. For example, my family often had picnics there on weekends, and I remember climbing trees and playing hide-and-seek with my siblings.

Suggestion: Дайте более развернутый ответ: используйте настоящее время, добавьте причину и одну-две дополнительные детали. Избегайте слишком коротких ответов — это снижает впечатление связной речи.

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they help me relax and get fresh air. I often go for a short walk or read a book on a bench when I have free time.

Suggestion: Устраните повторы и постройте ответ логично: прежде чем выражать желание, объясните почему (причины и преимущества). Добавьте связку и конкретный пример того, какие парки вы хотели бы видеть.

Example: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because the existing ones are beautiful and spacious. For instance, I would welcome more family-friendly parks with playgrounds and walking paths for exercise.

Suggestion: Сделайте ответ понятным и завершённым: назовите конкретные парки или типы парков, объясните причину и используйте связки. Избегайте неполных фраз и случайных слов (например, "Grant").

Example: Yes, there are several parks I'd like to visit in the future, especially national parks with mountains and lakes. I would like to go to them to hike and take photographs of the scenery.

× Yes, I like to go to parks as a child because for me the park is a place where you can go, you can run, you can walking and you can have a picnic with your family.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks as a child because for me the park was a place where you could go, you could run, you could walk and you could have a picnic with your family.

The student uses present tense 'like' and present modal forms while referring to past habitual actions ('as a child'). Use past tense for habits in the past: 'liked', 'was', and modal past form 'could'. Also replace the incorrect gerund phrase 'you can walking' with the base verb 'you could walk'. Suggestion: use past simple for past habits and ensure parallel verb forms (could + base verb).

× Yes, I like.

✓ Yes, I do.

The short answer to 'Do you still like going to parks now?' requires present simple auxiliary 'do' for emphasis: 'Yes, I do.' The original 'Yes, I like.' is incomplete because 'like' usually needs an object or auxiliary in short answers. Suggestion: use 'Yes, I do' or 'Yes, I still do'.

× Yes, I like because in my in my city parks are very beautiful and very big with attractions.

✓ Yes, I do because in my city the parks are very beautiful and very large and have many attractions.

The question uses conditional 'Would you like to see more parks in your city?' and the student should respond in present conditional/ability. 'I like' is incorrect as a short answer; use 'I do' or 'Yes, I would' depending on meaning. Also remove duplicated phrase 'in my in my city' and fix noun phrases: 'parks are very beautiful and very big' -> 'the parks are very beautiful and very large' and 'with attractions' -> 'and have many attractions'. Suggestion: correct duplication, use appropriate short answer form, and use natural collocation 'large' and 'have many attractions'.

× Yes, there are many, because in my future, Grant.

✓ Yes, there are many places I want to visit in the future, like Grant Park.

The response is unclear and incomplete. 'There are many' needs a noun (e.g., 'many parks' or 'many places'). 'In my future' is awkward; use 'in the future'. 'Grant' likely refers to 'Grant Park'—provide full noun. Suggestion: complete the noun phrase after 'many' and use 'in the future' for natural phrasing.