Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Speak more clearly and concisely. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), correct grammar (e.g., 'insisted that I go for a walk' or 'insisted I go'), and finish the thought with a specific detail. Keep answers under five sentences and use linking words to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. My grandmother insisted I walk in the nearby park every day, and she often introduced me to her friends so I could practise speaking with others. Because of that routine, I became more confident talking to strangers.

Suggestion: Improve sentence structure and completeness. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., 'because', 'also'). Remove unfinished clauses and fillers. Use accurate collocations (e.g., 'run into friends', 'chat').

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. Because I work in healthcare, I value fitness, so I go to the park most evenings to exercise. I also often run into colleagues or friends there, and we chat briefly which helps me relax after work.

Suggestion: This answer is generally clear and well-organised. To improve further, use smoother linking phrases and more precise vocabulary (e.g., 'replaced by high-rise buildings', 'reduce stress'). Add a brief example or consequence to make it more specific.

Example: Definitely. My city is becoming overcrowded and much green space has been replaced by high-rise buildings. As a result, residents need more parks where they can exercise, reduce stress, and socialize — for example, families with children often have nowhere safe to play.

Suggestion: Clarify the park name and purpose, correct grammar, and remove fillers. Start with a clear topic sentence naming the park, then give specific reasons with linking words (e.g., 'because', 'for example'). Avoid vague phrases like 'hybrid cat'—use accurate terms (e.g., 'hybrid species' or name the species).

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the Rann of Kutch conservation area in Gujarat. I saw a video about this nature reserve on Facebook, and it has become a popular tourist site because it protects endangered species and preserves unique wildlife such as wildcats and migratory birds.

× Yes, I enjoyed a lot going to the park, especially with my grandmother and she specially insisted me to, uh, go to the walk daily in the nearby park and used to introduce me her new friend so that I can develop public, uh, speaking skill and moreover, I made.

✓ Yes, I enjoyed going to the park a lot, especially with my grandmother. She especially insisted that I go for a walk in the nearby park every day and used to introduce me to her new friends so that I could develop my public speaking skills.

This sentence has multiple structure and word-order problems (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). 'Enjoyed a lot going' is incorrect word order; place 'a lot' after the verb phrase: 'enjoyed going to the park a lot.' 'She specially insisted me to' is incorrect: English uses 'insist that someone do' or 'insist on someone doing' and requires 'introduce me to her new friend(s)'. Tense consistency: past events should use past modal/correct past form: 'could develop' and plural 'skills'. Suggestions: split into shorter sentences, use 'insisted that I go' or 'insisted I go', use 'introduce me to', and use 'public speaking skills' (plural).

× Definitely yes, Being a health care professional, I am highly interested in keeping myself fit and healthy.

✓ Definitely yes. Being a health care professional, I am very interested in keeping myself fit and healthy.

This contains capitalization and word-choice issues (Grammar Problem Type ID 26 and 13). 'Definitely yes, Being' should be two sentences or separated properly; 'Being' should not be capitalized after a comma. 'Highly interested' is acceptable but 'very interested' is more natural here. Suggestion: use proper sentence boundaries and natural adverb choice.

× Moreover, I practice what I preach so in the evening time when I'm quite free I use.

✓ Moreover, I practice what I preach, so in the evening when I'm free I exercise.

The original ends with 'I use.' which is incomplete and lacks a verb/purpose (Grammar Problem Type ID 23 and 26). Also word order 'in the evening time' is wordy; 'in the evening' suffices. Suggestion: complete the clause with a clear verb such as 'exercise'.

× I go to park daily and I also sometimes run into my friends and we have chit chat there for some time it not only.

✓ I go to the park daily, and I sometimes run into my friends; we chat there for a while. It not only helps my fitness but also improves my social life.

Multiple issues: missing article before 'park' (Grammar Problem Type ID 22/17), awkward adverb placement 'also sometimes' (ID 20), incorrect phrase 'chit chat' (should be 'chat' as a verb or 'chit-chat' as noun), run-on sentence without punctuation (ID 26). The fragment 'it not only' is incomplete; complete the thought with a second clause. Suggestions: add the article 'the park', reorder adverbs, use 'chat' and split into clear sentences.

× Definitely yes. My city has become overcrowded, most of the land is replaced with the high rise or skyscraper buildings and the green space has shrunk.

✓ Definitely yes. My city has become overcrowded; most of the land has been replaced with high-rise or skyscraper buildings, and green space has shrunk.

Problems: verb tense and passive construction need perfect aspect 'has been replaced' (Grammar Problem Type ID 9/5), article use and adjective order for 'high-rise or skyscraper buildings' (ID 17/18). Suggestion: use 'has been replaced' to show completed change, hyphenate 'high-rise', and remove redundant 'the' before 'green space'.

× People are really looking for a park where they can do exercise, unwind the stress and keep themselves physically fit.

✓ People are really looking for parks where they can exercise, unwind from stress, and keep themselves physically fit.

Issues: 'do exercise' is non-idiomatic; use 'exercise' (Grammar Problem Type ID 13). 'Unwind the stress' is incorrect preposition/phrase; use 'unwind from stress' or 'relieve stress' (ID 11). Also plural 'parks' fits general statement. Suggestion: use idiomatic verbs and correct prepositions.

× I am highly interested in leagues market is situated in Gujarat.

✓ I am very interested in a place called Leagues Market, which is situated in Gujarat.

This sentence is garbled and lacks proper clause connection (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). It needs an article 'a place called' and a relative clause 'which is situated in Gujarat' to be grammatical. Suggestion: name the place clearly and connect clauses properly.

× I saw a video, uh, of this, uh, special natural conservation, uh, on a Facebook and it has become an emerging tourist point.

✓ I saw a video of this special nature conservation area on Facebook, and it has become an emerging tourist attraction.

Problems: word choice 'natural conservation' is awkward; use 'nature conservation area' or 'conservation area' (ID 13). 'on a Facebook' is wrong article use; use 'on Facebook' (ID 22). 'Tourist point' is non-idiomatic; use 'tourist attraction'. Suggestion: remove filler 'uh' and choose natural collocations.

× Uh, it, it not only keeping endangered species safe, but also preserving so many hybrid cat.

✓ It not only keeps endangered species safe but also preserves many hybrid cats.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'keeping' should be 'keeps' to agree with subject in present tense (Grammar Problem Type ID 6 and 27), unnecessary commas and repetition 'it, it', and wrong noun phrase 'hybrid cat' should be plural 'hybrid cats'. Suggestion: use 'not only ... but also' with parallel verb forms and correct subject-verb agreement.