Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevap daha doğal ve doğru zaman kullanımıyla kurulmalı. Kısa, doğrudan bir konu cümlesi kurun, gereksiz dolgu kelimelerinden (uh, um) kaçının ve geçmiş zamanı doğru kullanın. Ayrıca destekleyici bir detay ekleyin (ör. kimle gittiğiniz, ne yaptığınız). Örnek: “Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child because I used to play football there with my friends every weekend.”

Example: Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child because I used to play football there with my friends every weekend.

Suggestion: Cevap kısa ve eksik; olumsuz cevap verirken nedenini açıklayın ve bağlaç kullanarak destekleyici bilgi ekleyin. Ayrıca doğru ifade "No, I don't" veya daha doğal bir cümle kullanın. Örnek: “Not really — I don't go to parks much now because I live in a busy area and prefer indoor exercise.”

Example: Not really — I don't go to parks much now because I live in a busy area and prefer indoor exercise.

Suggestion: Cevap fikir belirtiyor ama dilbilgisi hataları ve belirsizlik var. "More parks" için doğru özne-fiil uyumunu kullanın ve gerekçeyi net bir şekilde verin; bağlaçlarla cümleleri bağlayın. Örnek: “Yes, I would — more parks would improve residents' quality of life, although they can be costly to build and maintain.”

Example: Yes, I would — more parks would improve residents' quality of life, although they can be costly to build and maintain.

Suggestion: Cevap belirsiz ve zaman uyumsuz; gelecek planından bahsederken gelecek zamanı doğru kullanın ve spesifik bir park veya etkinlik belirtin. Gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın. Örnek: “Yes, I plan to visit the new riverside park next summer because it has cycling paths and a lake.”

Example: Yes, I plan to visit the new riverside park next summer because it has cycling paths and a lake.

× Yes, in my child. I'm gonna, uh, go to, uh, parks.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I used to go to parks.

Original sentence uses incorrect words ('in my child') and informal spoken contractions ('gonna') that are not grammatical here. Also the sentence structure is awkward. Use a time clause 'when I was a child' and the past habitual 'used to go' to indicate repeated action in the past. Replace colloquial 'gonna' with 'used to' for clarity.

× No, I am not.

✓ No, I don't anymore.

The question asks about a present habit. 'No, I am not' is ungrammatical in this context because 'like going to parks' requires a verb 'do' in negative form for habits: 'I don't (like them) anymore.' Use 'anymore' if indicating change from past to present.

× Maybe, yes, uh, I think more parks is uh, more expensive, but yeah, I, I like to see park.

✓ Maybe, yes. I think more parks are expensive, but I would like to see more parks.

'More parks' is plural, so the verb must be plural 'are' not 'is'. Also 'see park' is incorrect: use 'see more parks' or 'visit parks'. Improve sentence structure and remove filler words. Use 'would like to' for polite desire.

× Maybe yes. Umm, I liked parks so I'm gonna go parks.

✓ Maybe yes. I liked parks, so I will go to parks in the future.

Mixing past 'liked' with colloquial 'gonna' and missing preposition 'to' makes this ungrammatical. For future intention use 'will' or 'going to' with the correct structure: 'I'm going to go to parks' or 'I will go to parks'. Include preposition 'to' after 'go'.