Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答要用正确的时态并更自然地组织句子。尽量用一个主题句然后补充一到两句具体细节，并使用连接词。例如把过去习惯用过去式（used to）表达，避免冗余词汇。

Example: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I used to visit them every weekend because I enjoyed the fresh air and the birds in the trees, and I liked watching the colourful flowers.

Suggestion: 注意时态和句子连贯，避免重复表达。先给出直接回答（Yes/No），然后用一两句说明原因并用连接词（because, so, however）。将过去/现在区分清楚。

Example: Not as often as before, because I am busy with my medical studies. However, I still enjoy going to parks occasionally to relax when I have free time.

Suggestion: 使用更自然的结构（not only... but also...）要保持动词形式一致并注意主谓一致。多给出具体好处并简洁表达。

Example: Yes. Not only would more parks make the city look nicer, but they would also improve people's health by providing places to run, play and relax.

Suggestion: 回答要更准确自然，避免语法错误（scenery是不可数名词），并说明理由和计划时间。保持一到两句具体细节，用连接词如 because 或 since。

Example: Yes, I'd like to visit the Guizhou Wetland Park. I've heard it has beautiful scenery, and since I study in Guiyang, I hope to go there sometime in the near future to see it for myself.

× I usually go to the park when I'm a child.

✓ I usually went to the park when I was a child.

句子在谈论过去的习惯（作为孩子时），应使用过去时。原句使用现在时（usually go / I'm）与表示过去的时间状语（when I'm a child）不一致。建议把动词和be动词改为过去式：usually went, was。

× I enjoy everything there, the refreshed air, the birds who live on the trees and the green flowers.

✓ I enjoyed everything there: the fresh air, the birds that live in the trees, and the green plants/flowers.

1) 表达过去喜好时动词应为过去时（enjoy → enjoyed）。2) refreshed air 用法不自然，应为 fresh air。3) who用于指人，指鸟应使用 that 或 which（或省略关系词）。4) birds live on the trees 不如 live in the trees 更自然。5) green flowers 若指植物可用 green plants，若确实指花则可用 green flowers。建议根据实际意思选择。

× Not always because now I'm busy in my work and study.

✓ Not always, because now I'm busy with my work and studies.

主要是介词和名词形式问题：busy with 表示忙于某事更自然；work and study 应写成 work and studies（复数，表示学业）或 study（做动名词时改为 studying）。原句时态（现在）可保留，因为说现在的情况。建议使用 busy with and studies。

× As a medical student, I spend all of my time in my major work.

✓ As a medical student, I spend all of my time on my major work/studies.

句子结构中介词搭配错误：spend time on 表示花时间做某事，不能用 in。major work 表达不够自然，如指专业学习可用 major studies 或 coursework。建议改为 spend all of my time on my major studies/work.

× So I didn't go to the park always, but I still like to go to park now.

✓ So I didn't always go to the park, but I still like to go to the park now.

1) 副词位置错误：always 通常放在助动词之后（didn't always go）。2) 定冠词缺失：go to the park（习惯性去某个类型的地点需用the）。3) 前半句是过去时，后半句是现在时，时态对比正确但需调整词序和冠词。

× Yes, not only did the park makes our city more beautiful, but also it has make our body healthier because it provide a place for us to run, to play and to relax ourselves.

✓ Yes, not only does the park make our city more beautiful, but it also makes our bodies healthier because it provides a place for us to run, play, and relax.

多处语法错误：1) 倒装从句中助动词后动词用原形（does ... make），不能用 makes。2) has make 错误，应该用 makes（一般现在时陈述事实），或 has made（现在完成）但并不需要。3) 主语单复数不一致：our body → our bodies。4) provide 应加 s（provides）以与主语 it 一致。5) relax ourselves 风格上冗余，常用 relax。建议使用一般现在时表达常态事实并修正主谓一致与复数。

× Yeah, I want to go to the Guizhou Wetland Park.

✓ Yes, I want to go to the Guizhou Wetland Park.

用词非严重错误，但口语中 'Yeah' 可改为更正式的 'Yes' 与考场语境更匹配；时态和结构正确。

× I have heard that there are many beautiful scenery, and I now study in Guiyang, so I usually want to look.

✓ I have heard that there is much beautiful scenery, and I am now studying in Guiyang, so I would like to go see it.

1) scenery 是不可数名词，不能用 many，改为 much 或直接用 beautiful scenery（不加量词）。2) I now study in Guiyang 更自然为 I am now studying in Guiyang（现在进行或现在时均可）。3) usually want to look 不自然，想表达想去看应说 I would like to go see it 或 I usually want to go and see it（但 usually 不适合表达未来计划）。建议用 would like to go see it 表达愿望。

× Maybe in the near future I will go.

✓ Maybe I will go in the near future.

语序稍显不自然。将 maybe 放句首或把时间状语放在句末更自然。时态（will go）正确，建议调整语序以更流畅表达。