Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你回答的时候没有直接回应问题，反而把问题复述成疑问句。提高分数的关键是用一到两句直接陈述过去的经历或感受，然后提供一两个具体细节。注意句子要自然、简短（最多5句），并使用连接词（例如：because, so, when）。

Example: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child because my family often had picnics there. I remember playing on swings and feeding ducks by the pond, which made those afternoons very happy.

Suggestion: 你的回答不相关且含糊，未直接回答是否现在仍然喜欢去公园。改进方法：直接用一句话说明现在的喜好，再用一两句具体说明原因或例子，使用连接词如 'because' 或 'however'。避免跑题或使用无关单词。

Example: Yes, I still like going to parks because they help me relax and get fresh air. For example, I often walk there in the mornings and sometimes meet friends for a coffee.

Suggestion: 你再次把问题重复且用词错误（pokes/pokes）。应直接表达是否希望城市有更多公园，并给出具体原因或建议。使用连接词如 'so' 或 'because' 来增强表达的逻辑性。

Example: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide green space and recreational areas. More parks would encourage outdoor activities and improve residents' well-being.

Suggestion: 你的回答完全不相关且语法混乱，未回答是否有想去的公园。改进建议：首先直接回答（Yes/No），然后列举一两个具体想去的公园并说明原因。保持句子简短清晰，使用连接词如 'for example' 或 'because'。

Example: Yes, I'd like to visit the large botanical garden on the south side because it has many rare plants. For example, I want to see the orchid greenhouse and take photos there.

× Do you like going to parks as a child?

✓ Did you like going to parks as a child?

原句使用現在時 (Do you like) 與時間狀語 as a child（表示過去）不一致，應使用過去時 did。建議：當句子提到過去的經歷或習慣時，用過去式（Did you ...）。

× Do you still like going to parks now?

✓ Do you still like going to parks?

原句有 now 與 still 同時出現時意思重複（still 已包含“現在仍然”的含義），語法上並不錯但更自然地可刪去 now。建議：表達現在持續狀態時，使用現在簡單時並選用一個時間副詞，例如 still。

× Do you seem like going to Pokémon?

✓ Do you feel like going to the park?

原句用 seem like + 動名詞 不自然，且 Pokémon（寵物小精靈）不符合上下文。想表達想不想去某處應用 feel like doing sth. 建議：使用 feel like + V-ing；若指公園應用 the park 或 parks。

× Would you like to see more pokes in your county?

✓ Would you like to see more parks in your county?

原句 pokes 不是正確名詞（可能打錯），且上下文為 park（公園）。此外 county（縣）可視情況保留。建議：檢查拼寫並保持名詞與上下文一致。

× Are they all important in what to go to in the furniture?

✓ Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

原句語序混亂，詞彙（furniture 家具）與語境無關。考官原問未來想去哪些公園，應用 Are there any parks you want to go to in the future? 或 Which parks would you like to visit in the future? 建議：理解問題意圖後，重組句子並使用正確詞彙（parks, in the future, want to go to）。