Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the answer grammatically correct, concise and include one specific memory to make it more vivid. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details using linking words. Keep it under five sentences.

Example: Yes. I loved going to parks as a child because I often played there with my friends. For example, we used to have picnics under a big tree and play hide-and-seek until sunset, which made those visits very memorable.

Suggestion: Correct verb forms and simplify sentences. Provide a clear routine and one reason with a linking word (e.g., because, so). Avoid repetition and keep it natural and concise.

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks when I have free time. For example, I often take a walk there after dinner because it helps me relax and enjoy the quiet away from traffic.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer then provide two specific reasons with clear language. Avoid vague or awkward phrases like “enhance personality” or “gossip” — use reasons such as health, community space, or recreation.

Example: Yes, I would like to see more parks because they provide safe places for exercise and help bring neighbours together. For instance, a new park could host weekend activities and give children space to play.

Suggestion: Be specific about which park and why. Mention one named park or a type of park and give a clear comparison using linking words (e.g., because, so). Avoid repetition and correct grammar.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the Rock Garden and Sukhna Lake Park in Chandigarh because the parks there are large and well maintained. For example, Sukhna Lake offers walking paths and open lawns where I could relax and enjoy nature.

× Yes, I usually like to go in parks when I was a child because in my childhood I go with my friends on parks and we often enjoy and I had a good time.

✓ Yes, I usually liked going to parks when I was a child because in my childhood I went with my friends to parks and we often enjoyed ourselves and I had a good time.

Errors: mixing present and past tenses and incorrect verb forms. Use past tense consistently when talking about childhood: 'liked' not 'like'; 'liked going' or 'used to go' is natural. Use past simple 'went' not 'go'. Use preposition 'to' with 'go to parks' rather than 'in' or 'on'. Add reflexive pronoun 'ourselves' after 'enjoyed'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use correct prepositions and reflexive pronoun.

× Yes, I usually like to go to parks now when I goes off when I was free and in later time also.

✓ Yes, I usually like to go to parks now when I am free and in my spare time as well.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'goes' and mixed time references. For present habitual actions use 'I am free' or 'when I am free'. 'In later time' is unnatural; use 'in my spare time' or 'later'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and consistent present tense.

× But when I have no time but at after having my dinner I usually like to walk in parks because it feels like we are peacefully and we can move anywhere without even the rush of traffic.

✓ But when I have no time during the day, after having my dinner I usually like to walk in parks because it feels peaceful and we can move anywhere without the rush of traffic.

Errors: awkward structure and incorrect word forms. Remove redundant 'but' and reorder: 'when I have no time during the day, after having my dinner' or 'after dinner'. Use adjective 'peaceful' rather than adverb 'peacefully' after 'feels'. 'Feels peaceful' describes the park. Suggestion: simplify clause order and use correct adjective.

× As I told you earlier that I belong to a village so there are no much parks in our area.

✓ As I told you earlier, I belong to a village so there are not many parks in our area.

Errors: 'no much' is incorrect; use 'not many' for countable plural nouns. Also add comma after introductory phrase. Suggestion: use 'not many' or 'few' with plural nouns.

× Yes, I would like to have more parks in my city because park should enhance a person's overall personality and parks should often enjoy time of gossip.

✓ Yes, I would like to have more parks in my city because parks should enhance a person's overall well-being and people can often enjoy time chatting there.

Errors: misuse of 'should' and awkward phrasing. 'Park should enhance a person's overall personality' is odd — use 'well-being' or 'quality of life'. 'Parks should often enjoy time of gossip' wrongly assigns action to parks; parks cannot 'enjoy'. Use 'people can enjoy chatting there'. Suggestion: ensure logical subjects for verbs and use appropriate nouns.

× Yes, I would like to go in parks like for example in Chandigarh As for example in big cities, because in big cities the park size is also big.

✓ Yes, I would like to go to parks, for example in Chandigarh or other big cities, because parks in big cities are also larger.

Errors: preposition 'in' with 'go' should be 'go to'. Repetition 'like for example' is redundant. 'As for example' is incorrect. Use 'for example' or 'such as'. Also change 'the park size is also big' to 'parks are larger'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions and concise phrases.

× So there are much more space than to smaller parks which are developed in some small times.

✓ So there is much more space than in smaller parks, which are developed in smaller towns.

Errors: 'much more space' needs singular 'there is' because 'space' is uncountable; compare 'than in smaller parks'. 'Than to smaller parks' is incorrect preposition. 'Some small times' is unclear; likely 'small towns'. Suggestion: use correct verb agreement with uncountable nouns and correct comparative structure.