Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar; start with a topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition of 'used to' and fix articles and word order.

Example: Yes, I loved going to the park near my house when I was a child. I went there with my friends every evening to play football and hide-and-seek, so it became a regular and happy part of my routine.

Suggestion: Begin with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect ideas. Correct verb forms and articles, and limit to 3–4 sentences. Provide one specific routine and one reason.

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, but I don't have time to visit every day. Typically, I go after work to unwind, and on weekends I meet friends there to chat and relax.

Suggestion: Give a direct opinion sentence, then add two clear, specific benefits using linking words. Use correct noun forms and articles, and avoid awkward phrasing.

Example: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and create pleasant spaces. For example, parks give children safe places to play and offer elderly people somewhere peaceful to walk and socialise.

Suggestion: Answer directly, then be specific about which parks and why. Use correct verbs and reduce redundancy. Mention one or two examples and a reason for visiting.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit several amusement parks in the future, especially those with big roller coasters and water rides. I want to go with friends to enjoy the rides and take a fun break from work.

× Yes, I love going to parks.

✓ Yes, I loved going to parks.

The question asked about past habit 'Did you like going to parks as a child?' so the student should use past tense. Use 'loved' to match the time frame of childhood and maintain tense consistency. Suggestion: Use past simple for feelings in the past (I loved).

× When I was a child, I always used to go to park, which was near my nearby my house.

✓ When I was a child, I always used to go to the park, which was near my house.

Missing definite article 'the' is required before singular countable noun 'park' when referring to a specific park. Also 'my nearby my house' is duplicated and incorrect; use 'my house'. Suggestion: Use 'the park' for a specific park and remove redundant words.

× I used to go there with my friends every evening and we used to play different games there.

✓ I went there with my friends every evening and we played different games there.

While 'used to' can express past habitual actions, repeating it is stylistically weak. Using simple past 'went' and 'played' is natural and matches the past habitual context. Suggestion: Prefer simple past for clear narration of past habits.

× It was very calm place and yeah.

✓ It was a very calm place.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'very calm place'. 'Yeah' is informal and unnecessary in a complete sentence. The clause requires an article for a singular countable noun. Suggestion: Use 'a' before singular countable nouns and avoid filler words in formal responses.

× Yes, I still like going to parks, although I don't have much time to go parks every day.

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks, although I don't have much time to go to parks every day.

Missing preposition 'to' after 'go' when referring to a place: 'go to parks'. This is a present tense preference; use present simple 'don't have'. Suggestion: Use 'go to [place]' construction.

× I usually go parks after my working hours for some time to relax my mind.

✓ I usually go to parks after my working hours to relax my mind for a while.

Missing preposition 'to' after 'go'. Word order and phrase choice: 'for some time' is better as 'for a while' or moved after 'relax my mind'. Suggestion: Use 'go to parks' and place time expressions naturally.

× Or I would go there and every weekends with my friends and to spend time with them.

✓ I would also go there every weekend with my friends to spend time with them.

Incorrect conjunction 'Or' and wrong plural/time expression 'every weekends'. Use 'also' to add information, 'every weekend' (singular) for a recurring event, and remove extra 'to'. Suggestion: Use 'every weekend' and connect ideas with 'also' or 'and' appropriately.

× Yes, the more the Greenbelt, the more will be its advantage to the city as the green area provide much clearer air and it is a site for the vulnerable people to spend their time, especially the elderly and the children can spend their time in the parks.

✓ Yes, more greenbelt areas would be advantageous to the city because green areas provide cleaner air and are places where vulnerable people, especially the elderly and children, can spend time.

Awkward comparative structure 'the more the Greenbelt, the more will be its advantage' and article errors. Subject-verb agreement: 'green area provide' should be 'green areas provide'. Redundant phrases and incorrect 'the vulnerable people'. Suggestion: Use conditional/modal 'would be advantageous', plural 'green areas', 'provide cleaner air', and concise phrasing. Use commas for list and avoid unnecessary 'the'.

× Yes, there are many parks that I want to explore in the future, especially amusement parks as it have a wide range of rides, roller coasters and even the water slide.

✓ Yes, there are many parks that I want to explore in the future, especially amusement parks, as they have a wide range of rides, roller coasters and even water slides.

Pronoun-number mismatch: 'amusement parks' is plural, so use 'they' not 'it'. Also 'the water slide' should be plural 'water slides' when speaking generally. Use commas for clarity. Suggestion: Ensure pronouns agree with antecedent number and use plural nouns for general statements.

× So I would love to go to amusement parks with my friends, to take a break from my work life and to unwind my mind.

✓ So I would love to go to amusement parks with my friends to take a break from my work life and unwind my mind.

Unnecessary commas and repeated 'to' before verbs; parallel verbs after 'to' should be coordinated without extra 'to'. 'Unwind my mind' is acceptable but 'unwind' alone is more natural. Suggestion: Use parallel structure: 'to take... and unwind...'. Remove extra commas.