Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one specific detail about activities or memories. Correct verb tenses (use past for childhood) and fix word forms (e.g. “my parents took me”). Avoid redundant phrases.

Example: Yes. I loved going to parks as a child because I used to play football with my friends every weekend. My parents often took me to the park, and I remember enjoying the swings and the open space for games.

Suggestion: Answer directly and organize reasons with linking words. Limit to two or three concise reasons and avoid listing too many vague points. Use varied vocabulary (e.g. peaceful, relaxing, social) and correct collocations (“eat snacks” rather than “junk foods”).

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they are peaceful and relaxing. Also, I often meet friends there to chat and have snacks, which makes it a pleasant way to spend an afternoon.

Suggestion: Provide a clear opinion with specific reasons and avoid repeating words. Use linking words (for example, because, so, therefore) and give one concrete benefit (health, community, environment). Replace vague phrases like “and like that” with specific examples.

Example: Yes, I would. More parks would improve people's health and provide safe places for children to play. For example, new parks could include playgrounds and walking paths that encourage exercise and community events.

Suggestion: Good specific detail and clear plan. Improve grammar and sentence flow: use correct name spelling, fix word order and pronouns, and avoid small errors (e.g. “It’s peaceful and perfect…”). Keep it to two or three sentences maximum.

Example: Yes, I plan to visit the City Botanical Garden next month because I enjoy seeing rare plants and taking photos of flowers. It is peaceful and would be perfect for a weekend picnic with friends.

× Yes, I was a child.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I enjoyed going to parks.

The original sentence is incomplete and does not answer the question directly. The examiner asked about liking parks as a child; a clear response should include time phrase and verb describing enjoyment. Use 'when I was a child' to set time and 'enjoyed' (past tense) to match the time frame.

× I like to go into parks because I like to play with my friends, so my parents are went to the park with me.

✓ I liked going to parks because I liked playing with my friends, and my parents would take me to the park.

Multiple errors: 'like' should be past tense 'liked' to match childhood context (past tense issue). 'Go into parks' is unnatural; use 'going to parks'. 'are went' is ungrammatical: 'went' is past tense, 'are' should be removed. Using 'would take me' or 'took me' correctly expresses habitual past action. Correct the parallel structure: 'liked going' and 'liked playing'.

× Yes, I like to go to the park because I think it's very peaceful and comfortable and I can communicate with my friends and others and I can eat junk foods, so I like it.

✓ Yes, I like going to the park because I think it's very peaceful and comfortable; I can meet my friends and sometimes eat junk food there, so I enjoy it.

Use 'like going' for habitual present (present tense issue). 'Communicate with my friends and others' is awkward; 'meet' is more natural. 'Junk foods' should be 'junk food' (uncountable). Reduce repetition of 'I' and 'like' by using 'enjoy it' for variety and clarity.

× Yes, I like to see more parks in my city because I think it's good for people because people can go to the park and play and like that.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they are good for people; people can go there to play and relax.

Avoid repetition ('because people because people') and vague phrase 'and like that'. Use 'I would like to see' for polite preference. Use plural 'parks' and a clear result clause 'they are good for people' and concise examples 'play and relax'.

× Yes, I would like to visit the City Bonatical Garden next month because I enjoy seeing rare plants and taking photos of the flowers.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit the City Botanical Garden next month because I enjoy seeing rare plants and taking photos of the flowers.

Spelling error 'Bonatical' should be 'Botanical' (not a grammar type but necessary). The modal 'would like to' is correct for future intention. No tense change needed; present participles 'seeing' and 'taking' are correct.

× It's peaceful they are, and perfect for a weekend picnic with friends.

✓ It is peaceful and perfect for a weekend picnic with friends.

The original word order 'It's peaceful they are' is incorrect in English. Combine into one coherent sentence: 'It is peaceful and perfect...' Maintain subject-verb order and coordinate adjectives with 'and'.