Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: This does not answer the examiner's question. Give a direct answer first, such as “Yes, I do,” and then add one or two specific reasons or examples. Avoid unrelated comments like “Good job!”

Example: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy taking pictures of mountains, rivers, and sunsets because the natural light makes the scenery look beautiful. I often take photos when I am travelling so that I can remember the experience.

Suggestion: You answer the question directly and give relevant personal details, but there are several grammatical and word-choice errors. Say “rural views” rather than “views in rural views,” and use “sunrises and sunsets.” The sentence “These panoramic views and help me” should be “These panoramic views help me.” Use a clear linking word such as “Moreover” or “As a result” to connect your ideas, and avoid repeating “views.”

Example: I prefer rural views because I live in the suburbs, where my house is surrounded by mountains and rivers. As a result, I can enjoy beautiful scenery, especially sunrises and sunsets, every day. These peaceful panoramic views help me relax after a long day.

Suggestion: You give a clear preference and a relevant example, but the answer is incomplete and contains several grammatical errors. Use “views in other countries” instead of “other countries views,” and say “places that have snow” rather than “the place have snow.” Complete the final idea and explain specifically what you enjoy about Japan, such as its temples, snowy landscapes, or cultural atmosphere.

Example: Honestly, I prefer views in other countries because they offer experiences that are different from those in my home country. For example, I would love to visit Japan to see its traditional temples and snow-covered landscapes. I think the combination of beautiful scenery and unique culture would make the trip unforgettable.

× I prefer views in rural views because I live in the suburbs

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I live in the suburbs

The phrase in rural views is incorrect because views are not locations. Use in rural areas to describe the location where the views can be found.

× I can see beautiful and peaceful views every day like sunsets and sunrise.

✓ I can see beautiful and peaceful views every day, such as sunsets and sunrises.

Sunset and sunrise are countable nouns in this context, so both should be plural when referring to these views in general. Also, such as is more appropriate than like when introducing examples in a formal answer.

× These panoramic views and help me relax after a long day.

✓ These panoramic views help me relax after a long day.

The word and incorrectly interrupts the subject-verb structure. These panoramic views is the subject, and help is the main verb, so and should be removed.

× Honestly I prefer other countries views because they can offer me a very different experience from my home country.

✓ Honestly, I prefer views in other countries because they can offer me a very different experience from my home country.

Other countries views uses an incorrect noun combination. Use views in other countries because in correctly indicates where the views are located. A comma is also needed after the introductory word Honestly.

× For example I love to see the temple or scenery in Japan

✓ For example, I love to see temples and scenery in Japan

The singular phrase the temple suggests one specific temple, but the answer is discussing temples generally. Use the plural countable noun temples without the definite article. Scenery is an uncountable noun and does not need an article here.

× especially in the place have snow

✓ especially in places that have snow

The original phrase has an incorrect subject-verb relationship and an unnatural singular noun phrase. Places is plural, so have is correct, and that connects the description clearly to places.

× especially in the place have snow because I.

✓ especially in places that have snow.

The phrase because I is incomplete and does not contain a complete idea. It should be removed unless it is followed by a complete clause, such as because I enjoy snowy scenery.