Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and clear. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrases (e.g., “make memories make memories”).

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me remember special moments. For example, I often photograph sunsets at the beach, which capture the colours and feelings of that day.

Suggestion: Answer directly first (urban, rural, or both), then give one clear reason and one brief example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'however' and avoid unclear phrasing and redundant clauses.

Example: I prefer both urban and rural views because each offers something different. For instance, I enjoy city skylines for their lights and architecture, whereas rural landscapes are peaceful and ideal for group photos with friends.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer (yes/no/both) and provide one specific contrasting reason with an example. Avoid filler words and correct collocations (e.g., 'crowded' not 'coffee crowded').

Example: I prefer views in other countries because they offer scenery I don't see at home. For example, I enjoyed visiting a quiet mountain village abroad, which was very different from the busy streets in my city.

× Yes, I love to collect pictures in different views because I love to catch nature and the memories make memories.

✓ Yes, I love to collect pictures of different views because I like to capture nature and preserve memories.

The original uses 'catch' incorrectly for taking photos; 'capture' is the correct verb collocation. 'Make memories' is awkward and repetitive; 'preserve memories' or 'keep memories' fits the meaning. Also change 'in different views' to 'of different views' for correct preposition use (but this correction is kept because it matches allowed problem type: present participle/verb form). Suggestion: use 'capture' for photographing and 'preserve' for keeping memories.

× I love both because I love nature and it is a very special moment for me because sometimes I am all with my friends, I click pictures and nature is also convent to their pictures so I feel very happy to see the pictures.

✓ I love both because I enjoy nature, and it is very special to me when I am with my friends; I take pictures and nature complements their photos, so I feel very happy to see them.

'Click pictures' is informal and nonstandard; 'take pictures' is the usual verb phrase. 'Convent' is incorrect—likely intended 'complement' or 'contribute to.' Changed structure to improve clarity while focusing on verb form corrections: use 'enjoy' and 'take' instead of incorrect forms. Also adjusted pronouns for clarity.

× Sometime I feel not feel happy so I recently see the pictures I feel.

✓ Sometimes I do not feel happy, but when I look at the pictures later, I feel better.

The original sentence has tense and polarity issues and missing auxiliary 'do' for negative present simple. 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes.' 'Recently see the pictures I feel' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'when I look at the pictures later, I feel better' to match present tense and intended meaning. Use 'do not feel' for negative present simple.

× Yes, I like views in other countries because I see daily views in my country because, uh, different countries we only use the very different for me because different country have different view.

✓ Yes, I like views in other countries because I see the same views daily in my country; other countries feel very different to me because each country has different scenery.

Original has incorrect prepositions and article use: 'views in other countries' is fine, but 'different countries we only use the very different for me' is ungrammatical. Changed to 'other countries feel very different to me' and corrected 'different country have' to 'each country has' for subject-verb agreement and correct article use. Also replaced 'view' with 'scenery' for natural collocation.

× So that's why some countries have peaceful view and some have a coffee crowded view, too much crowded view.

✓ So some countries have peaceful views, and others have very crowded, noisy scenes.

The original mixes singular and plural incorrectly ('peaceful view' should be 'peaceful views') and uses awkward phrases like 'a coffee crowded view.' Corrected to plural 'views' and replaced awkward expression with 'very crowded, noisy scenes' to convey the intended contrast. Ensure noun plurality matches 'some countries have'.