Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevap doğrudan ve olumlu, ancak dilbilgisi hataları ve yineleme var. Cümle yapısını düzeltip gereksiz tekrarlardan kaçının. Ayrıca bağlantı ifadeleriyle (for example, because, so) cümleleri daha akıcı ve mantıklı bağlayın. Örneğin ‘to take some memories with myself’ yerine ‘to keep memories’ veya ‘to remember the time’ kullanın. Maksimum 4-5 kısa cümleyle özlü ve doğal cevap verin.

Example: Yes, I love taking photos of different views. When I travel to scenic places, I usually take pictures to keep memories of the landscapes. For example, I often photograph mountains or lakes so I can remember those moments later.

Suggestion: Cevap net ve mantıklı, ama bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var ("better option" iki kez). Bağlaçlar ve çeşitlendirilmiş kelime kullanımı ile cevap daha doğal olur. Ayrıca bir kısa gerekçe ve bir örnek verin. Cümleleri 3-4 kısa cümleye indirgeyin.

Example: I prefer rural views to urban ones because cities are familiar to me and less unique. Rural areas, especially those with mountains or forests, offer more striking scenery. For instance, I enjoy photographing a quiet mountain village rather than a busy city street.

Suggestion: Cevapta ciddi anlaşılırlık sorunları var ("I prefer the boss" gibi hatalar) ve dilbilgisi hataları bulunuyor. Önce açık bir konu cümlesi verin (own country or other countries), sonra kısa gerekçe ve bir kontrast örneği kullanın. Kelime tekrarlarını azaltın ve tekil/çoğul uyumuna dikkat edin ("countries which have").

Example: I prefer views in my own country because it also has many beautiful places, especially in the north where mountain ranges are common. However, I admit some other countries can be more scenic; for example, Switzerland is famous for its stunning landscapes and would be a great place to photograph.

× Absolutely, taking picture of different view is a good habit of mine.

✓ Absolutely, taking pictures of different views is a good habit of mine.

The nouns 'picture' and 'view' should be plural to match the general activity described ('taking pictures of different views'). Use the gerund phrase 'taking pictures' as the subject; ensure noun plurality for general statements.

× When I visit different places, especially naturally beautiful places.

✓ When I visit different places, especially naturally beautiful ones, I always prefer to take pictures to keep memories with me.

This fragment lacks a main clause and is therefore incomplete. Add a main clause (for example 'I always prefer...') and replace the repeated noun 'places' with 'ones' to avoid redundancy.

× I always prefer to take pictures of these places to take some memories with myself.

✓ I always prefer to take pictures of these places to keep memories for myself.

'Take some memories with myself' is unidiomatic. Use 'keep memories for myself' or 'have memories to keep' instead. Also 'for myself' is the correct prepositional phrase rather than 'with myself'.

× Also to remember these times whenever I take a look at the picture.

✓ I also do this so I can remember those times whenever I look at the pictures.

This fragment lacks a subject and main verb. Rephrase to include subject 'I' and a finite verb 'do' and use plural 'pictures' when referring generally.

× I prefer the views of rural areas more than urban areas because the views of urban areas are something that we see in our everyday life.

✓ I prefer the views of rural areas to those in urban areas because urban views are something we see in our everyday life.

Use 'prefer A to B' rather than 'prefer A more than B'. Also replace the repeated phrase with 'those in urban areas' for clarity and 'urban views' for conciseness.

× That's why going to rural areas will be better option to take some pictures especially if that area is full of mountains or forests, that would be the better option.

✓ That's why going to rural areas is a better option for taking pictures, especially if the area is full of mountains or forests.

Avoid redundant phrases ('will be better option' and 'that would be the better option'). Use 'is a better option' for general preference and 'for taking pictures' as the correct gerund phrase. Also change 'that area' to 'the area'.

× I prefer the boss because there are also so many good views in my country as well.

✓ I prefer my own country because there are so many good views here as well.

'The boss' is incorrect and likely a mistranscription; replace with 'my own country'. Avoid redundant 'also' and 'as well' together; use one. Use 'here' to refer to one's country in context.

× Especially in the north part of my country, there are so many mountain chains and there are so many beautiful places to take picture.

✓ Especially in the northern part of my country, there are many mountain ranges and many beautiful places to take pictures.

Use the adjective 'northern' instead of 'north' before 'part'. 'Mountain ranges' is the natural collocation, not 'mountain chains'. 'Take pictures' should be plural and use correct collocation.

× But there can be other countries which has better scenery than my own country.

✓ But there can be other countries which have better scenery than my own country.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'countries' (plural), so the verb should be 'have' not 'has' to agree in number.

× For example, Switzerland will be the best place to take picture.

✓ For example, Switzerland would be the best place to take pictures.

Use 'would be' or 'is' depending on context; 'would be' fits hypothetical preference. Use plural 'pictures' and include the article 'the best place' is acceptable; 'to take pictures' is the correct collocation.