Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Reduce hesitation and repetition, speak more directly with a clear topic sentence, and provide one or two specific supporting details linked logically. Focus on fluency and precise vocabulary (e.g., "scenes" or "landscapes") and avoid filler words. Keep the answer within 2–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because each scene is unique and tells a different story. For example, I like photographing coastlines at sunset for their warm colors, and city skylines at night for the contrast of lights. This helps me compare images and choose the ones I like best.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give clear reasons with specific examples. Avoid unclear phrases and incorrect words ("Russian rush" is not appropriate). Use linking words like "because" and "for example" to structure your response. Limit to 2–3 concise sentences.

Example: I prefer rural views because they are calmer and more scenic. For example, rolling fields and old villages offer natural colors and peaceful atmospheres, whereas urban areas are often noisy and crowded.

Suggestion: Be concise and avoid over-explaining. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give a specific reason and an example. Replace vague words like "sceneries" with "landscapes" or "sites". Keep to 2–3 sentences for natural delivery.

Example: I prefer photographing views in my own country because there are many beautiful landscapes I know well. For instance, I often visit a nearby national park with waterfalls and forests that are perfect for photos, and I feel comfortable exploring these places.

× each and every frame and the frame, umm, frames of, uh, different places is very unique.

✓ each and every frame of different places is very unique.

Remove redundant words and correct structure: 'frames of different places' is plural but 'is' should match subject; however 'each and every frame' is singular in sense so use 'is'. Also avoid repetition 'the frame, frames'. Suggest simplifying to 'each frame of different places is unique.'

× by taking uh, different views, we can umm, summarize each and every, uh, frames we take and uh, we can evaluate which one is even more beautiful than uh, other one.

✓ by taking different views, we can summarize each frame we take and evaluate which one is more beautiful than the others.

'each' requires singular noun 'frame' not 'frames'. Use plural 'the others' for comparison. Also remove redundant filler words and repeated 'we'.

× Mostly, mostly I prefer the views in rural areas, because some the place and it's and everything's in rural areas is even more attractive than the urban areas.

✓ Mostly I prefer the views in rural areas, because places and everything there are more attractive than in urban areas.

The original has disfluent insertions and incorrect phrases like 'some the place and it's and everything's'. Clarify with parallel structure: 'places and everything there are more attractive than in urban areas.' Note subject-verb agreement: 'places ... are'.

× In urban areas, each and every place it is very Russian rush, so we can't.

✓ In urban areas, every place is very rushed, so we can't relax.

'Russian rush' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'rushed'. Remove redundant 'each and every' and unnecessary pronoun 'it'. Complete the idea after 'so we can't' with a verb like 'relax'.

× Mostly I prefer using my own country because umm, in our place we have so many beautiful umm, sceneries to capture.

✓ Mostly I prefer my own country because in our country we have so many beautiful sceneries to capture.

Avoid 'using my own country'—we say 'prefer my own country'. 'Our place' is informal; use 'our country'. 'Scenery' is usually uncountable, but 'sceneries' can be acceptable; 'many beautiful scenes' is a clearer alternative.

× Umm, Honestly, I don't visit any other country so I don't know about uh, what other countries can hold.

✓ Honestly, I have not visited any other country, so I don't know what other countries have to offer.

Use present perfect 'have not visited' to indicate experience up to now. 'Can hold' is awkward; use 'have to offer'. Remove filler words and correct word order.

× Uh, I umm, personally prefer to view, uh, take views of my own country.

✓ I personally prefer to take photos of views in my own country.

'Prefer to view, take views' is awkward. Use 'prefer to take photos of views' or 'prefer photographing views'. Maintain infinitive 'prefer to take' or gerund 'prefer taking'. Clarify the object 'photos' for natural phrasing.