Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and give one or two specific details using linking words. Use correct grammar for countable/uncountable nouns and plural forms.

Example: Yes, I enjoy photographing sunsets. I especially like them because the sun paints the sky in changing colours such as pink, purple and gold, so each sunset looks unique. For example, last week I captured a pink-and-gold sunset reflected on a river, which made the scene especially striking.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer first, then add one or two clear reasons with linking words. Fix grammar (infinitive form, articles) and avoid repetition. Provide a complete sentence explaining why rural views appeal to you.

Example: I prefer photographing rural areas. Because I live in a city, I see urban scenes every day, so I like rural landscapes for their quiet, natural features and open space; for instance, I enjoy capturing fields and traditional houses that feel timeless.

Suggestion: Answer directly, then support with specific comparisons and correct word forms (e.g., 'historic buildings', 'different from'). Use linking words to clarify reasons and give one concrete example.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because their architecture and historical sites often differ from those at home. For example, buildings in my country tend to use red brick, whereas in some European cities I photographed, facades are darker stone, which creates a very different atmosphere.

× I prefer to taking pictures for rural areas because I live in the urban area so So every so every day I can see the views on urban area however I rural area is

✓ I prefer taking pictures in rural areas because I live in an urban area, so every day I can see urban views; however, rural areas are different.

Error type 8: 'to taking' is incorrect because after 'prefer' we use the gerund (verb + -ing) without 'to' when expressing a general preference (prefer taking ...). Also 'for rural areas' and 'on urban area' use wrong prepositions (see problem type 11) and articles are missing or wrong (article errors, type 22). The sentence was also fragmented and repetitive. Suggested improvement: use 'prefer taking pictures in rural areas', use 'in an urban area' and 'urban views', and connect contrasting ideas with 'however' or a semicolon.

× Yes I like to take a picture for the unlike sunset because I think because the sun reflects different colour to the sky, I think it is beautiful like purple or pink or yellow. I think it's beautiful.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of unusual sunsets because I think the sun reflects different colors onto the sky; I think they are beautiful, like purple, pink, or yellow.

Error type 11: Incorrect prepositions and related phrasing. Use 'taking pictures of' (not 'take a picture for') and 'sunsets' plural to match general statement (singular/plural issue, type 1). 'Unlike sunset' is awkward; 'unusual sunsets' is clearer. Use 'reflects colors onto the sky' or 'in the sky' (preposition choice). Also 'colour' vs 'colors' is spelling variation; ensure consistency. Use plural pronoun 'they' for sunsets. Suggested improvement: use 'taking pictures of unusual sunsets' and 'reflects different colors in/onto the sky.'

× Like my country is red color or another country is black or

✓ For example, buildings in my country are often red, while in another country they may be black.

Error type 1: Singular/plural and noun phrase formation. 'My country is red color' is incorrect; countries are not 'a color'—buildings or streets are. Use plural 'buildings are red' or 'are often red.' Also 'another country is black' should refer to 'they' or 'the buildings there are black.' Suggested improvement: specify the noun that can have color (buildings) and match singular/plural appropriately.

× I prefer views on another country because the building or the history historical building another country is different from my country.

✓ I prefer views in another country because the buildings or historical architecture in other countries are different from those in my country.

Error type 11: Incorrect preposition 'on another country' should be 'in another country.' 'The building or the history historical building another country' is ungrammatical—use 'buildings or historical architecture in other countries.' Also adjective order and article use are wrong (article errors type 22 and order type 18). Suggested improvement: use 'views in another country' and 'buildings or historical architecture in other countries are different from those in my country.'

× because I think because the sun reflects different colour to the sky, I think it is beautiful like purple or pink or yellow.

✓ because I think the sun reflects different colors onto the sky; I think it looks beautiful, like purple, pink, or yellow.

Error type 2: Verb agreement and phrasing. 'the sun reflects' is correct form, but 'reflects different colour to the sky' uses wrong preposition and singular 'colour' when referring to multiple shades—use plural 'colors' and 'onto/in the sky.' Also 'it is beautiful' is vague; 'it looks beautiful' is clearer. Suggested improvement: use correct preposition 'onto' or 'in' and pluralize 'colors.'