Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer more fluent, accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (umm), correct grammar (use plural/singular, verb forms), and give one or two specific supporting details connected with linking words. Aim for 2–4 sentences total.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me remember places I’ve visited. For example, I often photograph city skylines and seaside landscapes so I can look back on the scenery and share those moments with my family and friends.

Suggestion: Answer directly (avoid answering 'Yes' to a choice question) and use clear reasons with correct vocabulary and grammar. State your preference in the first sentence, then give one specific reason using linking words (because, so). Avoid invented or wrong words like 'brew' and use natural phrases.

Example: I prefer views in urban areas because cities offer lively streets and parks. For example, after work people often walk along waterfronts or in city parks to relax, and I enjoy photographing those busy, colorful scenes.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer first and then one clear, specific reason. Use correct nouns (e.g. 'views' not 'wheels') and natural linking words (because, so). Keep sentences concise and avoid repetition.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because it’s easier to travel with my family and share experiences together. For instance, we often visit nearby mountains and beaches that are convenient for family photo trips, which makes the memories more meaningful.

× Yes, I really like taking a picture with different view because it can umm remember what I have to see.

✓ Yes, I really like taking pictures of different views because they can help me remember what I have seen.

The verb 'like' requires the gerund 'taking', which is correct, but 'a picture with different view' has singular/plural and preposition errors. 'Taking pictures of different views' is the natural collocation (preposition 'of' and plural 'pictures' and 'views'). 'It can remember' is incorrect because a picture cannot actively remember; use 'they can help me remember' and adjust tense to 'have seen' to indicate past experiences. Suggestions: use plural nouns for general activities, use 'of' after 'pictures', and use 'help someone remember' rather than 'remember' as an intransitive action for an object.

× I can write out what umm the picture where is there and I can share the picture with my family or my friends.

✓ I can write down where the picture was taken and I can share the pictures with my family and my friends.

The original mixes word order and pronouns: 'what the picture where is there' is ungrammatical. Use 'write down' to record information, and 'where the picture was taken' is the correct noun clause with past tense 'was taken'. Also use plural 'pictures' to match general activity and use 'and' not 'or' when mentioning both groups. Suggestions: use correct clause order for 'where' questions and prefer 'write down' for recording notes.

× Yes, I prefer brew in the urban areas because umm, the when the people finish work, they can go to walking there to make some relax or make some delight exercise.

✓ Yes, I prefer the urban areas because when people finish work, they can go walking there to relax or do some light exercise.

Several issues: 'prefer brew' appears to be a miswording; remove 'brew' and say 'prefer the urban areas' or 'prefer urban areas'. 'the when the people' has an extra article and incorrect word order; use 'when people finish work'. 'go to walking' is incorrect; use 'go walking' or 'go for a walk'. 'make some relax' and 'make some delight exercise' are incorrect phrases — use 'to relax' and 'do some light exercise'. Suggestions: remove unnecessary articles, use correct verb patterns ('go walking', 'do exercise'), and choose appropriate adjectives ('light' not 'delight').

× I prefer the wheels in my own country because I can bring my family with me, I can share the moment with them.

✓ I prefer the views in my own country because I can bring my family with me and share the moments with them.

'The wheels' is a wrong word choice; likely meant 'views'. Use plural 'views' and plural 'moments' for repeated experiences. Combine clauses with 'and' rather than repeating 'I can'. Suggestions: choose correct vocabulary ('views'), keep consistent plurality, and prefer concise coordination.

× So I will prefer the view with my own country.

✓ So I prefer the views in my own country.

Using 'will prefer' is unnecessary for a general preference; simple present 'prefer' is appropriate. Also 'the view with my own country' is ungrammatical — use 'views in my own country' or 'the views of my own country'. Suggestions: use simple present for general preferences and correct preposition 'in' with 'country' and plural 'views' for generality.'