Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Reduce hesitation and correct basic grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Use correct verb forms (e.g., "take" not "to taking"). Avoid filler words like "umm" and "uh" and keep responses concise (max 5 sentences).

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph mountains and rivers when I visit the countryside, and I also like close-up shots of flowers and animals because they show interesting details.

Suggestion: Make a clear choice or explain a balanced preference with structured sentences. Use linking words (e.g., "however", "because") to contrast urban and rural views. Be specific about what you like in each area and fix vocabulary ("farmer farms" -> "farms"). Avoid repetition and fillers.

Example: I prefer both urban and rural views because each offers something different. For instance, rural areas have peaceful farms, trees and open roads, while urban areas have interesting architecture and lively street scenes, so I enjoy photographing both settings.

Suggestion: Use correct grammar for possession and nationality (e.g., "my country", "I belong to"). Give a clear reason and one or two specific examples. Avoid trailing off; finish your sentences. Use linking words like "because" and "for example" to connect ideas.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because India is very diverse and beautiful. For example, it offers a range of landscapes such as the Himalayas, the Ganges river plains and the Thar Desert, so I can photograph many different scenes without traveling far.

× Of course I like to taking pictures in umm, different views, uh, I often go to uh, views like uh, mountain, rivers, gardens and I like to taking pictures of flowers, animals.

✓ Of course I like taking pictures of different views. I often go to places like mountains, rivers, and gardens, and I like taking pictures of flowers and animals.

The student incorrectly uses the infinitive with 'to' plus the -ing form ('to taking'), which is ungrammatical. After verbs of liking ('like') it is correct to use either the gerund ('like taking') or the infinitive without -ing ('like to take'), but not 'to taking'. Also use plural nouns where appropriate (mountains) and consistent prepositions ('of different views', 'places like'). Suggestion: use 'like taking' or 'like to take' and pluralize countable nouns when referring generally.

× I prefer both areas umm in the rural areas uh, we can enjoy in farmer farms and there are also natural views like trees, roads, houses, uh, while in rural, uh, while in urban.

✓ I prefer both areas. In rural areas we can enjoy farms and natural scenery such as trees, roads, and houses, while in urban areas we can enjoy city views.

Errors: incorrect preposition 'enjoy in farmer farms' — 'enjoy' does not take 'in' here and 'farmer farms' is unnatural; use 'farms' or 'farmland'. Repetition and missing 'areas' after 'urban' cause clarity issues. Suggestion: use 'enjoy farms' or 'enjoy the countryside' and include 'areas' after 'rural' and 'urban' for parallel structure.

× I prefer to uh, see views in my countries because I'm belongs to India and India is very beautiful country and it has different views, uh, like mountains, rivers, uh, desert and.

✓ I prefer to see views in my country because I belong to India. India is a very beautiful country and it has different landscapes, like mountains, rivers, and deserts.

Problems: 'my countries' is wrong; should be singular 'my country'. 'I'm belongs to India' mixes 'be' and the verb 'belong' incorrectly — use 'I belong' (simple present) or 'I'm from India'. Missing article 'a' before 'very beautiful country'. 'desert' should be plural 'deserts' when listing types of landscapes. Suggestion: say 'I belong to India' or better 'I am from India', use 'my country', include articles where needed, and pluralize general categories.