Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles, plurals), use more precise vocabulary, avoid redundancy, and limit to 3–4 concise sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos when I travel because they help me remember places. For example, I often photograph coastal landscapes and city streets to capture different atmospheres. I also share a few of my best shots on social media so friends can see them.

Suggestion: Clarify the main idea (urban vs rural) and fix major grammar and vocabulary mistakes. Use a topic sentence stating preference, then give 1–2 clear reasons with linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and incorrect words like 'switched off many high rise bringing.'

Example: I prefer urban views to rural ones because cities offer diverse architecture and vibrant nightlife. For instance, I enjoy photographing high-rise buildings and busy streets since they create dynamic compositions.

Suggestion: Make the answer more concise and correct grammar and word choice. Start with a clear preference, then provide specific examples (regions, foods, festivals) using linking words like 'for example' or 'for instance.' Keep to 3–4 sentences.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because it has great regional variety. For example, the coastal states have scenic beaches and seafood dishes, while the northern states offer historic architecture and unique festivals, so I enjoy photographing that diversity.

× I like capturing different kind of landscape and City side and nature etcetera.

✓ I like capturing different kinds of landscapes, cityscapes, and nature, etcetera.

The noun phrases need plural forms: 'different kind' should be 'different kinds' and 'landscape' should be plural when referring to multiple types. 'City side' is nonstandard; 'cityscape' is the correct noun for urban views. Use commas to separate items for clarity. Suggestion: Use plural nouns when referring to multiple types and choose standard collocations like 'cityscape'.

× I like taking pictures when I travel because it help me to remember the place I visited.

✓ I like taking pictures when I travel because it helps me to remember the places I visit.

Subject 'it' with verb 'help' requires third-person singular form 'helps'. Also 'the place I visited' mixes past with habitual action; use present simple 'places I visit' to match 'I like taking pictures when I travel.' Suggestion: Use 'helps' for third-person singular and align tense for habitual actions.

× And I love to upload my picture on social media with my friend.

✓ And I love to upload my pictures to social media with my friends.

'Upload' usually takes the preposition 'to' not 'on' in this context. 'Picture' should be plural 'pictures' if you upload multiple, and 'with my friend' likely means 'with my friends' (plural) or 'for my friends' depending on intent. Use plural for consistency. Suggestion: Use 'upload to social media' and match singular/plural appropriately.

× I prefer Indian areas compared to rural India when it come about news.

✓ I prefer urban areas in India to rural areas when it comes to news.

Original sentence has unclear structure and incorrect comparison. 'Indian areas compared to rural India' is confusing. Use 'urban areas in India' versus 'rural areas', and 'when it comes to' is the correct idiom. Also verb 'come' needs third-person singular 'comes'. Suggestion: Rephrase for clear comparison and use idiomatic expression 'when it comes to'.

× I've been there and switched off many high rise bringing.

✓ I've been there and seen many high-rise buildings.

'Switched off' is incorrect in this context; the intended verb is 'seen'. 'High rise' should be hyphenated as 'high-rise' and 'bringing' is a mistaken word for 'buildings'. Suggestion: Use 'seen many high-rise buildings' to convey observation; ensure correct word choice.

× They have a different culture and the nightlife of urban area was much better so I like more capturing.

✓ They have a different culture, and the nightlife in urban areas is much better, so I enjoy taking more photos there.

Tense inconsistency: 'have' (present) vs 'was' (past). Use present 'is' for general statements. 'I like more capturing' is ungrammatical; use 'I enjoy taking more photos' or 'I like taking more photos.' Also 'urban area' should be plural or specified. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent (present simple for general facts) and use natural verbs: 'enjoy taking photos'.

× I prefer using my own country because my country is so big and convinced of many different places with many different kind of state, their different kind of food with different culture and every state and culture have their own history and way of celebration is different from each other.

✓ I prefer my own country because it is so big and consists of many different places and states, each with different kinds of food and cultures; every state and culture has its own history and ways of celebrating.

Multiple errors: 'prefer using my own country' should be 'prefer my own country'. 'Convinced of' is incorrect; use 'consists of' or 'has'. 'Different kind of state' should be 'different kinds of states' and 'their different kind of food' should be 'different kinds of food'. Subject-verb agreement: 'every state and culture have' should be 'has'. 'Way of celebration is different from each other' is awkward; use 'ways of celebrating' or 'ways of celebration' and ensure plural agreement. Suggestion: Simplify and restructure the sentence, fix collocations ('consists of'), use plural forms where needed, and ensure subject-verb agreement.