Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No and brief reason), then add one specific example and a linking phrase. Avoid fillers (“umm”, “you know”) and grammatical errors (use continuous/proper tense and plural forms correctly).

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, but not always. For instance, I often photograph countryside fields when the light is beautiful; however, sometimes I prefer to simply admire a view without taking photos because I want to remember it personally.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and follow with specific reasons and one concrete detail. Remove repetitions and complete the unfinished thought. Use linking words (because, for example, therefore) to make the response coherent.

Example: I prefer rural areas because they offer peaceful natural scenery. For example, I enjoy mountain and sea views which feel refreshing after a busy day; therefore, I find rural landscapes more relaxing than crowded cities.

Suggestion: Respond directly and clearly. Begin with a topic sentence stating preference, then explain why with specific examples. Correct word choice (use ‘visiting’ not ‘using’; ‘vibe’ not ‘fuse’) and avoid fillers. Mention one or two concrete features of foreign cities you enjoy.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because the architecture and atmosphere are different. For example, big cities like Tokyo or London have unique skylines and lively street scenes that I find exciting and inspiring when I visit.

× Sometimes I'm taking picture of different fields, but sometimes life is just going without taking pictures, you know umm, when I see a good view, something I just want to see and not really taking pictures.

✓ Sometimes I take pictures of different fields, but sometimes life just goes by without taking pictures, you know. Umm, when I see a good view, sometimes I just want to look and not really take pictures.

Error type: incorrect use of continuous form and verb forms. 'I'm taking picture' is wrong because habitual actions use simple present: 'I take pictures'. Also 'picture' should be plural: 'pictures'. 'Life is just going' should be 'life just goes by' to express time passing; 'going' without 'by' is unnatural. 'something I just want to see' should be clearer as 'sometimes I just want to look' and 'not really taking pictures' should match the infinitive/simple form: 'not really take pictures'. Suggestions: use simple present for habitual actions, pluralize countable nouns when appropriate, and use correct verb patterns (infinitive or base form after 'want').

× I prefer rural areas because in the rural areas, somehow usually we we we see a Mountain View and a sea view and it's really refreshing view because in my daily activity, I also.

✓ I prefer rural areas because in rural areas we usually see mountain views and sea views, and they are really refreshing, because in my daily activities, I also ...

Error type: singular/plural mismatches and article misuse. 'see a Mountain View and a sea view' should be plural 'mountain views and sea views' when speaking generally. 'it's really refreshing view' needs plural subject agreement: 'they are really refreshing' or 'it's a really refreshing view' depending on singular/plural. 'in my daily activity' should be plural 'daily activities' for general routine. Remove unnecessary repeated words 'we we we'. Suggestions: match singular/plural consistently for general statements, use plural for habitual multiple instances, and ensure verb agreement with the chosen subject.

× I prefer rural areas because in the rural areas, somehow usually we we we see a Mountain View and a sea view and it's really refreshing view because in my daily activity, I also.

✓ I prefer rural areas because in rural areas we usually see mountain views and sea views, and they are really refreshing, because in my daily activities, I also ...

Error type: preposition and article misuse. The phrase 'in the rural areas' is better as 'in rural areas' for generalization. 'in my daily activity' should be 'in my daily activities' or 'in my daily life'. Suggestions: omit 'the' when speaking generally about a category, and use 'in my daily life/activities' for routines.

× Wow. In other countries, it's really interesting. I really love using another countries, especially in the big city. The fuse in the big city, in other countries like America or London or Tokyo, it's really amazing, you know?

✓ Wow. Other countries are really interesting. I really love visiting other countries, especially big cities. The atmosphere in big cities in countries like America, England, or Japan is really amazing, you know?

Errors: incorrect verb choice and determiners. 'I really love using another countries' is incorrect: 'using' is wrong verb and 'another countries' mixes singular determiner with plural noun; correct is 'visiting other countries'. 'The fuse' is likely a mispronunciation or wrong word; 'the atmosphere' fits meaning. Also country examples: use country names correctly ('America' is acceptable colloquially but pair with 'England' or 'the US'; 'London' and 'Tokyo' are cities, so match 'countries like the US, or cities like London or Tokyo' or say 'countries or cities like...'). Suggestions: choose verbs that express travel (visit), ensure determiners match number, and use correct nouns for intended meaning.

× I prefer rural areas because in the rural areas, somehow usually we we we see a Mountain View and a sea view and it's really refreshing view because in my daily activity, I also.

✓ I prefer rural areas because we usually see mountain and sea views there, which are really refreshing, and they suit my daily activities.

Error: run-on, repetition, and incomplete sentence. The original repeats 'we' and ends abruptly 'I also.' Restructure into coherent clauses: state preference, give reason, and complete the thought. Suggestions: avoid repetition, complete sentences, and use relative clauses ('which are...') to link ideas.