Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise, correct mistakes, use a clear topic sentence and 1–2 supporting details with linking words. Avoid repetitions and filler words. Also use appropriate vocabulary (e.g., "capture" not "captain") and finish the thought.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I like to capture beautiful scenery when I travel because photos help me remember special moments and places, and I often share them on social media.

Suggestion: Start with a clear preference sentence, then give two specific reasons connected by linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., "I prefer rural areas" and "it relaxes my mind and relieves stress"). Avoid excessive fillers.

Example: I prefer rural areas. For example, the natural scenery such as mountains, rivers and fields is very calming, and the fresh air helps me relax and relieve stress.

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence and then add specific reasons using linking words. Fix phrasing ("prefer views in my own country") and avoid trailing off. Add one concrete example or memory to make it personal and specific.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because the landscapes are familiar and meaningful to me. For instance, seeing the coastal cliffs reminds me of family trips from my childhood, which makes those views more special.

× 'Absolutely, I love captain beautiful scenery whenever I travel, taking photos Remember Remember me special moments and places and I can share my pictures on social media. Uh, actually photography is.'

✓ 'Absolutely. I love capturing beautiful scenery whenever I travel and taking photos to remember special moments and places. I can also share my pictures on social media. Actually, photography is my hobby.'

'The original sentence has multiple sentence structure problems: incorrect verb choice "captain" instead of "capturing", missing connectors, repetition "Remember Remember", and sentence fragments like "Actually photography is." Correct by using the correct verb "capturing", linking ideas with conjunctions and infinitive purpose phrase "to remember", and completing the final clause with a noun (hobby). Suggestion: simplify into clear clauses, check spelling of verbs, and finish fragments.'

× 'I prefer using rural areas, uh, it has natural scenery like mountains, rivers and uh, fields.'

✓ 'I prefer rural areas because they have natural scenery like mountains, rivers, and fields.'

'The original mixes singular and plural: "rural areas" (plural) followed by "it has" (singular). Subject-verb agreement requires plural verb "have" for "they" or change subject to singular. Also remove unnecessary word "using." Suggestion: match subject number and verb, and use a conjunction to connect reason.'

× 'Actually it is peaceful and relaxing our minds and fresh our uh, stress.'

✓ 'Actually, they are peaceful and relaxing; they refresh our minds and reduce stress.'

'The original is ungrammatical: "relaxing our minds" is acceptable but "fresh our stress" is incorrect. Use appropriate verbs: "refresh our minds" and "reduce stress." Also ensure subject reference: "they" refers to rural areas or scenery. Suggestion: choose verbs that collocate with nouns (refresh minds, reduce stress) and maintain clear subjects.'

× 'I like fresh air.'

✓ 'I like the fresh air.'

'This sentence is acceptable but adding the definite article "the" makes it more natural when referring to the air in rural areas. Suggestion: include articles where appropriate to sound more natural.'

× 'Personally, I prefer the using my own country and it is more connected to the scenery in my own country.'

✓ 'Personally, I prefer my own country because I feel more connected to its scenery.'

'The original has extra word "the" and incorrect gerund "using" and repeats "in my own country." Fix by removing unnecessary words and rephrasing: "prefer my own country" and use possessive "its scenery." Suggestion: avoid redundant phrases and use possessives to show connection.'

× 'It has beautiful places and reminds me of my childhood and family trips.'

✓ 'It has beautiful places that remind me of my childhood and family trips.'

'The original mixes clauses; better to link with relative pronoun "that" to show which places cause the memory. Suggestion: use relative clauses to connect noun and its effect.'

× 'Also it is.'

✓ 'Also, it is familiar and comforting to me.'

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