Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more direct and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, use correct tense and articles, and give one or two specific supporting details linked with connectors. Avoid unclear words (e.g. "hell") and redundant phrases.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, photographing city skylines and mountain landscapes helps me notice details I would otherwise miss, and it often gives me a fresh perspective on familiar places.

Suggestion: Answer directly which you prefer, correct vocabulary ("views" not "wheels"), and give clear reasons using linking words. Be consistent: urban areas are usually more crowded, so explain why you like certain urban spots or quiet rural scenes to avoid contradiction.

Example: I prefer views in certain urban areas, especially quiet parks or riverfronts in the city, because they combine interesting architecture with pockets of greenery. For instance, a city riverside at dawn is peaceful yet visually varied, so I can photograph both buildings and nature.

Suggestion: State your preference clearly and give a specific reason with an example. Avoid vague phrases like "maybe" and fix grammar ("other countries" not "another countries"). Use linking words to connect your reason and example.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because they often show different cultures and landscapes that I haven't seen before. For example, visiting coastal towns in Japan offered me unique colors and architecture that were very different from scenes in my home country.

× Here's I do taking pictures from the different views is my favorite because it's helped me think that it's hell.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views; it's my favorite because it helps me see perspectives I might have missed.

Grammar problem type ID: 12 and 26. The original sentence uses incorrect pronouns/words ('Here's I do') and wrong word order ('taking pictures from the different views is my favorite') and contains an unclear phrase ('it's helped me think that it's hell'). Corrected sentence removes extraneous words, fixes preposition use ('of different views'), adjusts verb tense and agreement ('helps' for present simple), and clarifies meaning ('see perspectives I might have missed'). Suggestion: start with a clear subject and verb ('I like'); use correct prepositions ('of' for pictures of views); use present simple for habitual likes; avoid unclear idioms.

× It has more like pers perspective that sometimes I might be not seeing it.

✓ It gives me more perspectives that I might not have noticed before.

Grammar problem type ID: 13 and 26. The phrase 'more like pers perspective' is ungrammatical and 'I might be not seeing it' has incorrect word order for negation. Correction uses a proper verb ('gives') and noun ('perspectives') and places negation correctly ('might not have noticed'). Suggestion: use clear nouns and proper verb forms for ability/possibility (might + present perfect or base form) and place 'not' before the main verb.

× So it's a very my favorite.

✓ So it's one of my favorite hobbies.

Grammar problem type ID: 12 and 22. The phrase mixes articles and possessives incorrectly ('a very my favorite'). Correction replaces the phrase with a grammatically correct expression ('one of my favorite hobbies'). Suggestion: avoid combining 'a' with 'my'; choose either an article or a possessive and use a noun afterward.

× I prefer wheels from the urban areas because it's helped me remind of the nature and it's not crowded because I like the places that is that are not crowded, like in the downtown or in the main city.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because they remind me of nature and they are not crowded; I like places that are not busy, like downtown.

Grammar problem type ID: 11 and 12 and 26. 'Wheels' is the wrong word for 'views'; 'from the urban areas' should be 'in urban areas'. Verb agreement errors ('it's helped me remind of the nature') and incorrect use of 'is that are' are present. Correction uses correct vocabulary ('views'), correct prepositions ('in urban areas'), correct pronouns ('they') and subject-verb agreement ('remind me', 'are not crowded'). Suggestion: choose accurate nouns, match pronouns to their antecedents, and keep subject-verb agreement.

× I prefer from another countries because maybe it's all other perspective that I maybe like more than in my countries and in my country I can see.

✓ I prefer other countries because they offer different perspectives that I might like more than those in my country.

Grammar problem type ID: 27 and 22 and 11. Problems include wrong preposition ('prefer from'), incorrect pluralization/articles ('another countries', 'my countries'), and sentence fragments ('and in my country I can see'). Correction uses correct phrase 'prefer other countries', plural agreement ('perspectives'), correct demonstrative ('those in my country') and removes unnecessary fragments. Suggestion: use 'other countries' (not 'another' with plural), ensure nouns and pronouns agree in number, and complete the comparative clause with a clear object.