Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevap doğrudan ve anlaşılır fakat dilbilgisi hataları, dolgu kelimeler (uh, like) ve tekrarlar mevcut. Cümle sayısını 2–3 ile sınırlayıp, bir ana fikir ve 1–2 destekleyici detay verin. Fiil yapısını düzeltin (I like taking, I will take) ve gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın. Ayrıca bağlaçlar kullanarak ifadeyi akıcı hale getirin (for example, because, when).

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, when I travel to another country I like to photograph its landscapes and city scenes because I recently bought a new camera and I want to practice with it.

Suggestion: Cevap kısa ve doğrudan ama tekrar ve açıklama eksikliği var. Tek cümlede ana fikri söyleyip ikinci cümlede kısa bir neden veya örnek verin. Gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın ve bağlantı sözcükleri (because, since, for example) kullanın.

Example: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the energy and variety of architecture there. For example, I like photographing busy streets, modern buildings and interesting public art.

Suggestion: Cevap belirsiz ve çok dolgu kelime içeriyor; ayrıca dilbilgisi hataları var (another countries → other countries). Daha net bir başlangıç cümlesi kurun (It depends, but currently I prefer...), sonra sebep verin ve bir örnek ekleyin. Bağlaçlarla ifadeyi düzenleyin (because, although).

Example: It depends, but at the moment I prefer views in other countries because I have lived in my own country for a long time and want to see new places. For instance, I’m interested in photographing foreign architecture and landscapes I haven’t seen before.

× I like to taking pictures of different views and like, if I, uh, go to do another country, I will take, uh, pictures of there.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views and, if I go to another country, I will take pictures there.

The phrase 'like to taking' incorrectly combines the infinitive 'to' with the -ing form; use either 'like to take' or 'like taking'. 'Go to do another country' is ungrammatical; use 'go to another country' or 'go to visit another country'. Also 'take pictures of there' is incorrect word order; use 'take pictures there'. Improve by choosing correct verb form (infinitive or -ing) and simplifying the verb phrases. Suggested practice: replace 'to taking' with 'taking' or 'to take', use 'go to another country' or 'visit another country', and place 'there' after 'take pictures'.

× Uh, and I enjoy it because, uh, I have a new camera.

✓ And I enjoy it because I have a new camera.

The sentence is mostly correct but contains filler 'uh' and an unnecessary comma; keep present simple 'enjoy' and 'have' for current states. Remove fillers for clearer speech. Practice speaking smoothly and omit filler words.

× I think I prefer the urban areas because I don't really like rural areas, so.

✓ I think I prefer urban areas because I don't really like rural areas.

The original uses present simple correctly but includes an unnecessary comma and trailing 'so.' Remove the trailing 'so' for completeness. Use 'urban areas' without 'the' unless referring to specific places.

× Uh, it depends on the, uh, time, but uh, now I prefer another uh, countries views because I live in my country for a long time, so I want to see, uh.

✓ It depends on the time, but now I prefer views of other countries because I have lived in my country for a long time, so I want to see them.

Several issues: 'another countries views' mixes singular and plural; use 'views of other countries' or 'another country's views'. Also 'I live in my country for a long time' should be present perfect 'I have lived in my country for a long time' to indicate an action continuing to the present. 'I want to see, uh.' is incomplete; specify 'them' (the views) or 'other places'. Remove filler words. Practice correct noun-adjective agreement (other + plural noun) and appropriate tense (present perfect) for duration.