Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời tự nhiên nhưng hơi dài và có một vài lỗi nhỏ về collocation và logic. Hãy tập trung vào câu chủ đề rõ ràng, rút ngắn câu xuống tối đa 3–4 câu, dùng collocation chính xác (ví dụ “capture moments” thay vì “save the moment”), và tránh lặp ý. Thêm một chi tiết cụ thể về loại khung cảnh bạn thích chụp sẽ làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I especially like capturing sunsets and city skylines because the colors change quickly and they create dramatic scenes. These photos help me remember trips and share memories with friends.

Suggestion: Ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng cấu trúc và ngữ pháp cần cải thiện (ví dụ: ‘I more like’ → ‘I prefer’; ‘immerse myself with the nature’ → ‘immerse myself in nature’). Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, rồi dùng 1–2 câu bổ sung với liên từ để giải thích vì sao, kèm ví dụ cụ thể về cảnh bạn thấy hấp dẫn.

Example: I prefer rural views to urban ones because there is more greenery and peace. For example, I enjoy photographing rolling hills and small lakes where I can relax and focus on details like wildflowers.

Suggestion: Ý tưởng tốt và tự nhiên nhưng cách diễn đạt hơi dài và câu điều kiện có thể rõ ràng hơn. Hãy mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sau đó nêu lý do cụ thể vì sao bạn muốn đi nước ngoài (ví dụ: kiến trúc, phong cảnh khác biệt), và kết thúc bằng một ví dụ cụ thể về nơi bạn muốn tới.

Example: I prefer seeing views in other countries because they offer different landscapes and cultural scenes. For instance, I would love to visit Japan to photograph traditional temples and cherry blossoms, which are very different from what I see at home.

× I think it is a good way to save the moment and whenever we have time we can gaze at it and get a lot of nostalgia.

✓ I think it is a good way to preserve moments, and whenever we have time we can look at them and feel nostalgic.

Use present simple appropriately and correct noun number and verb choice: 'save the moment' is unnatural; 'preserve moments' is better. 'it' should match plural 'moments' so use 'them'. 'get a lot of nostalgia' is incorrect collocation; use 'feel nostalgic'. Suggestion: use natural verbs and ensure pronoun agrees with the noun number. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Well, I think I more like the views in the outskirts because I think there will be more greenery and I can immerse myself with the nature.

✓ Well, I think I prefer the views on the outskirts because there is more greenery and I can immerse myself in nature.

Several issues: preference should use 'prefer' not 'I more like' (restructure). Use preposition 'on the outskirts'. Use 'there is' (singular uncountable 'greenery') and correct preposition 'immerse myself in nature' not 'with the nature'. Also remove redundant 'I think'. Suggestion: say 'I prefer the views on the outskirts because there is more greenery and I can immerse myself in nature.' Grammar problem type ID:11

× Well, in my opinion, I have enough time with my country, so if I had a chance, I would like to go to another country and explore the culture as well as the views.

✓ Well, in my opinion, I have spent enough time in my country, so if I had the chance, I would like to go to another country and explore its culture as well as its views.

'Have enough time with my country' is ungrammatical: use 'have spent enough time in my country' to indicate experience. Use conditional 'if I had the chance' (article 'the'). Use possessive 'its culture' and 'its views' to refer to the other country. Suggestion: make temporal and possessive relationships clear and use appropriate prepositions and articles. Grammar problem type ID:6