Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản, chia động từ và đại từ cho đúng; sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và rút gọn để tránh lặp từ; bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể về loại ảnh và lý do chụp. Ví dụ: dùng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen, tránh lặp “if I”.

Example: Yes, I do. I always take photos to keep memories of places and people. When I feel sad, I often look at these pictures to cheer myself up. I especially like landscape shots because they remind me of peaceful moments.

Suggestion: Rèn cấu trúc câu để trả lời trực tiếp (I prefer... / I don’t prefer...), dùng liên từ để nối ý và sửa từ vựng không phù hợp (ví dụ: 'funny' → 'a bit overwhelmed' hoặc 'bustling'). Thêm một câu giải thích cụ thể vì sao.

Example: I prefer urban views because I find the city atmosphere calming and convenient. For example, I enjoy walking along quiet streets and visiting cafés, which helps me relax. Rural areas can feel a bit too busy or unfamiliar for me.

Suggestion: Sử dụng thì và cấu trúc chính xác khi nói về kinh nghiệm (I haven't had a chance...), phát biểu quan điểm rõ ràng (I prefer...) và nêu lý do cụ thể (vì văn hóa, kỷ niệm, cảnh đẹp). Tránh dùng cấu trúc phức tạp không cần thiết.

Example: I haven't had the chance to travel abroad, so I prefer views in my own country. I feel connected to its landscapes and culture, and local scenery often brings back personal memories.

× Yes they do.

✓ Yes, I do.

The student used 'they' incorrectly to refer to themselves; subject pronoun should be 'I' for first person. Use 'I do' to answer a yes/no question about personal preference. Suggestion: replace 'they' with 'I' and include a comma after 'Yes'.

× I am the person who's always want to keep all of the memory and sometimes if I had a sad, if I if I'm sad or something like that, I will open it to see you again.

✓ I am the person who always wants to keep all the memories, and sometimes if I'm sad I open them to look at them again.

Multiple issues: 'who's always want' is incorrect because 'who' refers to 'I' so verb needs third person singular 'wants' (Third person singular + subject-verb agreement). 'Want' error maps to third person singular (ID 2) and subject-verb agreement (ID 27) but per instructions we only correct types in list; 'Verb + -ing form' also applies for 'always want' usage with continuous aspect. 'the memory' should be plural 'memories' (singular/plural issue). 'if I had a sad' is ungrammatical; correct is 'if I'm sad'. Also pronouns for photos should be 'them' rather than 'it' or 'you'. Suggestion: use 'who always wants', plural 'memories', 'if I'm sad' and 'open them to look at them again'.

× I'm think I'm not prefer ones because when I'm in urban areas I feel peace I can find unwind and when I'm a rural areas I feel funny busy.

✓ I don't think I prefer either because when I'm in urban areas I feel peaceful and can unwind, but when I'm in rural areas I feel a bit bored or too busy.

Several tense and verb form problems: 'I'm think' should be 'I don't think' (present simple for opinion). 'I'm not prefer' is incorrect; 'prefer' is a stative verb used in simple present with 'I don't prefer' or 'I prefer not to'; better: 'I don't think I prefer either'. 'I feel peace I can find unwind' is ungrammatical: use adjective 'peaceful' and verb phrase 'can unwind'. 'when I'm a rural areas' has article and number errors; correct 'when I'm in rural areas'. 'I feel funny busy' is incorrect collocation; choose 'a bit bored' or 'too busy'. Suggestion: use 'I don't think I prefer either', 'feel peaceful' and 'can unwind', and 'in rural areas' and clearer adjectives.

× I didn't have a chance to go out of my country, but I think I love my country enough to think I prefer my views on my country than other countries.

✓ I haven't had a chance to leave my country, but I think I love it enough to prefer seeing views in my country to those in other countries.

Tense and preposition issues: 'I didn't have a chance' is grammatically acceptable but present perfect 'I haven't had a chance' fits because the situation continues to the present. 'Go out of my country' is less natural than 'leave my country'. 'I think I love my country enough to think I prefer my views on my country than other countries' is awkward: use 'prefer X to Y' construction and avoid repeating 'think'. Also use pronoun 'it' for the country. Suggestion: use present perfect for experiences, 'leave my country', and 'prefer ... to ...' structure, and replace repeated words for clarity.