Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp hơn, sửa ngữ pháp và dùng từ chính xác (ví dụ: 'selfies' thay vì 'selfie' hoặc 'when I take selfies'). Tránh lặp từ như 'different views' nhiều lần; bổ sung một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể về kiểu khung hình hoặc mục đích chụp (ví dụ: ánh sáng, góc mặt, phông nền). Giữ độ dài không quá 4-5 câu và dùng liên từ để tạo mạch lạc.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy taking photos, especially selfies. When I take selfies I try different angles and lighting to find the most flattering shot. I often experiment with backgrounds or expressions so I can choose one to post on social media.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, tách thành câu ngắn, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng liên từ phù hợp. Ví dụ, dùng 'in my opinion' ở vị trí phù hợp và sửa 'a energetic' -> 'an energetic'. Thêm một ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ: tòa nhà chọc trời, cánh đồng lúa) để minh họa sự khác biệt giữa hai loại cảnh quan.

Example: I prefer both, but for different reasons. In my opinion rural areas are calmer and show everyday life, like rice fields and small houses, which I find peaceful. Urban areas are energetic with tall buildings and busy streets, which can be exciting to photograph.

Suggestion: Cần sửa lỗi nghiêm trọng về từ vựng và ngữ pháp: 'wheels' là sai — bạn có thể muốn nói 'views'. Tránh cấu trúc rườm rà như 'the photos that were taking'; thay bằng 'photos I have seen online'. Nên mở rộng lý do cụ thể hơn (ví dụ: quen thuộc, dễ tiếp cận, văn hóa địa phương) và dùng liên từ để rõ ràng. Giữ tối đa 4 câu.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because I am more familiar with the places and culture. I haven't travelled abroad, so I only know foreign scenery from photos online, which feels less real to me. When I travel domestically I can explore sights in person and learn about local traditions.

× Actually yes, I love taking pictures of different views, especially when I selfie.

✓ Actually yes, I love taking pictures of different views, especially when I take selfies.

The verb 'selfie' is a noun; to describe the action use 'take selfies'. Use the verb 'take' + plural noun 'selfies' for repeated actions. Improve by using 'take a selfie' for single action or 'take selfies' for habitual actions.

× Whenever I selfie, I take tons of different views about my face.

✓ Whenever I take a selfie, I take tons of pictures of my face from different angles.

Again 'selfie' is a noun; use 'take a selfie'. 'Tons of different views about my face' is awkward; use 'pictures of my face from different angles'. Ensure correct noun phrases and prepositions.

× Then I can choose the one that I like the most and post it.

✓ Then I can choose the one that I like the most and post it.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. Keep concise structure 'choose the one... and post it'.

× I think both of them are equally breathtaking for rural areas in my opinion it brings more a daily life and calmer vibe while urban areas brings more a energetic and chaotic vibe.

✓ I think both are equally breathtaking, but in my opinion rural areas bring more of a sense of daily life and a calmer vibe, while urban areas bring a more energetic and chaotic vibe.

Multiple issues: 'both of them' can be 'both' here; 'for rural areas' is incorrect placement. 'brings' should be 'bring' to agree with plural subject 'rural areas' (subject-verb agreement). 'more a daily life' incorrect quantifier/word order; use 'more of a sense of daily life'. 'a energetic' should be 'an energetic'. Improve by splitting into clearer clauses and using plural verbs.

× I would prefer wheels in my own country because I haven't gone to another country so I don't know the wider views besides the photos that were taking and posted online and on the Internet.

✓ I would prefer views in my own country because I haven't been to another country, so I don't know the wider sights except for the photos that have been taken and posted online.

'Wheels' is incorrect word choice; should be 'views' or 'sights'. 'haven't gone to' is less natural than 'haven't been to'. 'wider views besides the photos that were taking' has tense and passive errors: use present perfect passive 'have been taken' and 'except for' instead of 'besides'. Also remove redundancy 'online and on the Internet'.