Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Jawaban sudah menjawab pertanyaan tetapi perlu lebih alami, ringkas, dan tata bahasa yang benar. Perbaiki kesalahan tata bahasa (mis. "taking picture" → "taking pictures", "travel to overseas" → "travel abroad"), kurangi pengulangan, dan tambahkan detail spesifik tentang apa yang Anda suka foto (mis. pemandangan alam, arsitektur). Jaga jawaban tetap 2–3 kalimat maksimal.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. When I travel abroad with my parents I always bring my camera to capture landscapes and interesting architecture, especially at sunrise or sunset.

Suggestion: Jawaban kurang terstruktur dan mengandung pengulangan serta kesalahan tata bahasa (mis. "vibes is" → "vibes are", "I am used to see" → "I am used to seeing"). Buat satu kalimat topik yang jelas, lalu satu kalimat pendukung spesifik (contoh: suara burung, pemandangan hijau). Hindari mengatakan "actually" berkali-kali dan batasi 2–3 kalimat.

Example: I prefer rural views because they are calming and full of greenery. For example, I enjoy quiet fields and the sound of birds when I visit the countryside on trips.

Suggestion: Jawaban perlu perbaikan tata bahasa, kejelasan dan spesifikasi. Hindari frasa kacau (mis. "I'll ultimately I prefer", "because this there are"). Sebutkan alasan konkret mengapa pemandangan di negara lain Anda sukai (mis. kebersihan, arsitektur tradisional, taman). Gunakan 2 kalimat: satu pendapat, satu contoh spesifik.

Example: I generally prefer views in other countries, especially Japan and Korea. I find their streets and parks very tidy and well-designed, and I especially enjoy visiting traditional gardens and clean cityscapes.

× Yes, I usually like taking picture of different views because sometimes when I travel to overseas with my parents, I tend to bring my camera with me and start to capture a moment with them.

✓ Yes, I usually like taking pictures of different views because sometimes when I travel overseas with my parents, I tend to bring my camera with me and start to capture moments with them.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match 'different views' (singular/plural mismatch). 'Travel to overseas' is incorrect; use 'travel overseas' without 'to'. 'A moment' is better as 'moments' to match general habitual action. Also keep gerund 'taking' is fine. Suggestion: use plural nouns when referring to multiple items and omit unnecessary prepositions.

× Actually I love the views in rural areas because the vibes is always calming and also bringing happy vibes.

✓ Actually I love the views in rural areas because the vibes are always calming and also bring happy feelings.

The subject 'vibes' is plural, so the verb must be plural 'are' (subject-verb agreement). 'Bringing' is a present participle awkwardly used; use 'bring' to form a parallel verb. 'Happy vibes' is repetitive; 'happy feelings' or 'a happy atmosphere' is clearer. Suggestion: ensure verb form agrees with plural subjects and keep parallel structure for connected verbs.

× But actually I am used to see the views in urban areas which now I live in.

✓ But actually I am used to seeing the views in urban areas where I now live.

'Be used to' requires a noun or gerund, so use 'seeing' not 'see'. Also 'which now I live in' is incorrect relative clause order and preposition placement; use 'where I now live' for natural English. Suggestion: after 'used to' use -ing and use 'where' for location relative clauses.

× So I cannot really decide both.

✓ So I cannot really decide between the two.

'Decide both' is ungrammatical; the correct collocation is 'decide between the two' when choosing between two options. Suggestion: use 'decide between' + 'the two' for choices between two items.

× But if we are on a trip I would prefer rural area.

✓ But if we are on a trip I would prefer rural areas.

'Rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' to match general preference for that type of places, or use article 'the rural area' if referring to a specific area. Suggestion: use plural for general preferences or include article for specific reference.

× I'll ultimately I prefer the views on other countries such as Japan and Korea as I've been there before and the views are very calming and happy vibes because this there are very tidy and neat.

✓ Ultimately, I prefer the views in other countries such as Japan and Korea because I have been there before, and the views are very calming and pleasant since they are very tidy and neat.

Several issues: 'I'll ultimately I prefer' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'Ultimately, I prefer'. Use 'in other countries' not 'on'. 'As I've been there before' is fine but position it after the clause. 'Happy vibes' is informal and ungrammatical here; use 'pleasant'. 'Because this there are very tidy and neat' is incorrect word order and pronoun use; change to 'since they are very tidy and neat.' Suggestion: remove redundant words, use correct preposition 'in', reorder clauses for clarity, and use appropriate adjectives.