Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 答えは意図が伝わりますが、表現がやや冗長で文法や語順の改善が必要です。まずトピック文をはっきりさせ（I enjoy photographing scenery.）、その後で理由を2文以内で簡潔に述べましょう。また“memorize”は写真については不自然なので、“remember”や“capture”を使うと自然です。接続表現（because, so）を一度だけ使い、繰り返しを避ける練習をしてください。発音の流れも意識して、文を滑らかにつなげること。

Example: I enjoy photographing scenery when I travel because photos help me remember beautiful places. For example, I often take landscape shots at sunrise to capture the colors and mood.

Suggestion: 内容は伝わりますが、多くの発音うなり声（uh, umm）や誤語（"you"や"Auburn"）があり、語彙・文法の正確さが低下しています。まず誤った単語を正し（I prefer urban areas）、短く明確なトピック文を使いましょう。追加説明では具体的な理由（tall buildings, vibrant streets, better photo opportunities）を1〜2例挙げ、接続語（for example, because）で論理をつなぐ練習をしてください。スムーズな話し方と語彙の正確さに注意。

Example: I prefer urban areas because they offer more interesting architecture and lively street scenes. For example, cities like Tokyo have tall buildings and colorful neighborhoods that are great for photography.

Suggestion: 意図は明確ですが、表現が不自然で語順や語彙の選択に改善の余地があります。“make me new feeling”や“give me impression and attractive something”は英語として不自然です。代わりに“feel refreshed,”“leave a strong impression,”や“seem more attractive”などのフレーズを使いましょう。トピック文→理由→具体例の順に、最大5文以内で簡潔に述べる練習をしてください。また“so that's why I think so”のような重複は避ける。

Example: I prefer views in other countries because they often feel fresh and different from what I'm used to. For example, seeing historic European streets or tropical landscapes abroad gives me memorable impressions and new inspirations for photography.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I love going to travel and I want to memorize the beautiful view, so that's why I think so.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I love traveling and I want to remember the beautiful scenes, so that's why I think so.

The phrase 'going to travel' is awkward; use the gerund 'traveling' after 'love'. 'Memorize' is normally used for facts or words; use 'remember' for recalling scenes. 'View' is countable and in this context plural or replaced with 'scenes'. Suggestion: use 'love traveling' and 'remember the beautiful scenes' for natural English.

× Uh, I prefer you in Auburn areas because I love, uh, urban area, for example, Tokyo or Osaka. Uh, I think umm, there are many high building.

✓ Uh, I prefer urban areas because I love cities, for example, Tokyo or Osaka. Uh, I think there are many tall buildings.

'I prefer you in Auburn areas' is incorrect pronoun usage; 'you' should be omitted and 'urban areas' is the intended phrase. 'Auburn' is likely a misspelling of 'urban'. 'Urban area' should be plural to match 'areas' and general preference. 'High building' is ungrammatical; use plural 'tall buildings' or 'high-rise buildings'. Suggestion: say 'I prefer urban areas' and 'there are many tall buildings'.

× I prefer views in other countries because I think overseas views make me new feeling and give me impression and attractive something, so that's why I think so.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I think overseas scenery makes me feel refreshed and leaves a strong impression on me, so that's why I prefer them.

Phrases like 'make me new feeling' and 'give me impression and attractive something' are ungrammatical. Use 'make me feel refreshed' or 'give me a new feeling' and 'leave a strong impression on me'. Also ensure pronoun agreement: 'views... prefer them'. Suggestion: use natural verbs for emotional responses: 'makes me feel refreshed' and 'leaves a strong impression'.