Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Good content and natural language. Improve coherence and reduce minor errors: avoid vague phrases like "the subtle color around me" (use specific colors or lighting), correct article use ("natural scenery" is uncountable), and make the final example more precise and linked to the main idea. Keep answers within 3–4 sentences and use a linking phrase when adding the personal example.

Example: I really enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially natural scenery like forests and lakes. For example, I often capture warm golden light at sunset to show color contrast. Last Sunday, when I had some free time, I photographed the overcast sky to practice capturing mood and texture.

Suggestion: Strong, specific reasons and good vocabulary (biodiversity, peaceful atmosphere). Improve by tightening sentences and fixing the final word choice ("than the crowded" is incomplete—use "crowded cities"). Use a linking word to connect reasons and give a brief personal example or consequence to enrich the answer.

Example: I prefer rural views to urban ones because the countryside has more green space and greater biodiversity, with many plants, animals and birds. Additionally, the peaceful atmosphere and open landscapes are more relaxing than crowded cities, so I often go hiking on weekends to enjoy the fresh air.

Suggestion: Answer addresses the question but has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases that affect clarity ("many part", "several championship in different reasons", "in first someday"). Improve by using correct verb forms and clearer sequencing: state preference, give a concise reason with linking words, and finish with a clear plan or desire. Limit to 2–3 sentences and be specific about what you want to see abroad.

Example: I enjoy views both at home and abroad. When I was an athlete, I traveled to many parts of my country and became familiar with its landscapes; however, I have only seen foreign scenery online, so I would love to visit Japan one day to photograph its mountains and temples.

× I love photographing natural sceneries and the subtle color around me.

✓ I love photographing natural scenery and the subtle colors around me.

'Scenery' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'sceneries'. 'Color' in this context refers to multiple hues around the speaker, so use the plural 'colors'. Use uncountable vs countable correctly to match standard English usage.

× Last Sunday when I had some free time, I took several photos of the overcast sky.

✓ Last Sunday, when I had some free time, I took several photos of the overcast sky.

The sentence is grammatically correct in tense but needs a comma after 'Last Sunday' to set the time phrase apart for clarity. No tense change required; this is a punctuation improvement to follow standard sentence structure.

× I enjoy rural views more than those in metropolitan areas because the countryside has much more green space and is rich in biodiversity with many different plants, animals and birds.

✓ I enjoy rural views more than those in metropolitan areas because the countryside has much more green space and is rich in biodiversity, with many different plants, animals, and birds.

The original sentence is mostly correct grammatically, but it needs a comma before the list phrase 'with many different...' and Oxford comma after 'animals' can improve clarity. This is punctuation and list formatting rather than adjective/adverb form, but improves readability without changing tense.

× Moreover, I find the peaceful atmosphere and open landscapes more relaxing than the crowded.

✓ Moreover, I find the peaceful atmosphere and open landscapes more relaxing than the crowded ones.

'The crowded' is incomplete; you need a noun or pronoun to compare with 'open landscapes'. Adding 'ones' completes the comparison, referring to crowded areas. This fixes an adjective usage/comparison omission.

× I prefer both views in my own country and views from other countries.

✓ I prefer both views in my own country and those from other countries.

Repeating 'views' is awkward. Using 'those' avoids repetition and makes the sentence more natural. This addresses sentence structure and parallelism.

× I explored many part of my country when I was an athlete and attended several championship in different reasons, so I know it well.

✓ I explored many parts of my country when I was an athlete and attended several championships in different regions, so I know it well.

'Part' should be plural 'parts' because 'many' requires a plural noun. 'Championship' should be plural 'championships' after 'several'. 'Reasons' was used incorrectly; the intended word is 'regions' meaning areas. These are pluralization and word choice errors.

× However, I have only seen foreign places online and I would really like to visit them in first someday.

✓ However, I have only seen foreign places online and I would really like to visit them in person someday.

The phrase 'in first' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'in person' meaning to see somewhere physically. 'Someday' placement is fine at the end. This corrects an article/phrase usage error.