Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more direct and grammatical: state a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (plural/singular, prepositions) and avoid redundancy. For example, say why you enjoy photographing views and mention a specific subject (e.g. landscapes, skies) and who you photograph with.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I often photograph dramatic skies and city skylines because the colours change quickly, and I like sharing them with friends and family.

Suggestion: Give a clear preference sentence and support it with specific reasons linked logically. Use correct nouns and prepositions (e.g. 'the landscape', 'the weather', 'with friends'). Keep it concise and avoid repetition.

Example: I prefer rural views because the landscape is peaceful and the weather often creates beautiful light. For instance, I enjoy walking in the countryside with friends to photograph fields and sunsets.

Suggestion: Answer directly and avoid hesitation. State whether you prefer local or foreign views and give a clear, specific reason with one example. Use correct vocabulary for 'city' and describe the light or atmosphere accurately.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because I know the best spots and their seasonal light. For example, the old city centre looks especially beautiful at dusk when the warm streetlights create a cosy atmosphere.

× Yes, I like taking pictures in different views, other like weather and enjoying in friends and families.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, such as the weather, and enjoying time with friends and family.

Original sentence misused pronouns and noun forms: 'other like weather' is unclear and 'enjoying in friends and families' incorrectly uses 'in' and plural 'families'. Use 'such as' to give examples, 'of' with 'pictures', and 'with friends and family' to indicate companionship. Also 'enjoying time' makes the activity clear. Suggestion: replace vague fragments with clear noun phrases and correct prepositions.

× I prefer using like rural areas because they landscape and weather are very fantastic and enjoyable.

✓ I prefer rural areas because the landscape and the weather are very beautiful and pleasant.

Errors include unnecessary verbs 'using like', wrong word order 'they landscape', and missing articles before 'landscape' and 'weather'. 'Fantastic and enjoyable' is awkward for weather and landscape; 'beautiful and pleasant' is more natural. Also remove 'using' and 'like' which are redundant. Suggestion: use 'prefer' + noun phrase, include definite article 'the' for specific features, and choose natural adjectives.

× I would like to this weather and rural areas to enjoy in friends.

✓ I would like to spend time in this weather and in rural areas to enjoy with friends.

Phrase 'would like to this weather' is missing a verb; 'to enjoy in friends' wrongly uses 'in' and places 'friends' as an object of 'enjoy'. Add a verb like 'spend time' and correct prepositions: 'in rural areas' and 'with friends'. Suggestion: use full verb phrases and 'with' to show companionship.

× I prefer views in on country because, uh, this city was very beautiful and cities are very light.

✓ I prefer views in my country because this city was very beautiful and the cities are very lively.

Original has 'in on country' which mixes prepositions; use 'in my country' or 'in the country'. 'Cities are very light' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'lively' or 'bright'. Also remove filler 'uh' in formal answers. Suggestion: choose correct preposition for location and use appropriate adjective for atmosphere.

× The light light, light super Kyla.

✓ The lights are amazing; they are bright and very beautiful.

Original is fragmented and unintelligible: repeated words and unknown 'Kyla'. It lacks clear subject-verb structure. Rephrase to a complete sentence describing the lights: use plural subject 'lights' with verb 'are' and adjectives 'amazing', 'bright', 'beautiful'. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use clear adjectives and proper nouns only if correct and intended.