Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable and gives personal reasons, but it is a bit repetitive and some grammar is incorrect. Make a clear topic sentence, follow with one or two specific supporting details, use linking words, and correct tense and phrasing (e.g., "I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me preserve memories"). Keep to 3–4 concise sentences.

Example: I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me preserve memories of places I've visited. For example, when I'm stressed I look at these pictures and remember peaceful moments from my trips. In this way, photography helps me relax and keeps important memories for the future.

Suggestion: The answer is unclear and repetitive. Start with a direct topic sentence stating your preference (urban or rural), then give one or two clear reasons with specific examples and use linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Avoid phrases like "according to me" and correct grammar (e.g., "I prefer urban views because..."). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Example: I prefer views in urban areas because cities offer a wide variety of scenes, such as modern architecture and bustling streets. For example, I like photographing city skylines at sunset and colorful markets during the day. These varied subjects make urban photography more interesting to me.

Suggestion: Your main idea is clear but the answer is repetitive and contains grammar mistakes. State your preference directly, give one or two specific reasons and an example, and use linking words for coherence. Avoid vague phrasing like "I don't expect that from the other countries" — be specific about what you mean.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because I feel more connected to its landscapes and culture. For instance, I enjoy photographing local festivals and familiar countryside scenes that remind me of home. These familiar subjects make my photos more meaningful and enjoyable to take.

× I like taking pictures of different views because it is special for me and I like to collect memories for my future.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views because it is special to me and I like collecting memories for my future.

The verb 'like' can be followed by either 'to' + infinitive or the gerund. Using 'like to collect' is acceptable, but 'to collect memories' is awkward; 'collecting memories' (gerund) matches the earlier 'taking' and sounds natural. Also 'special for me' should be 'special to me' (preposition choice), but primary fix is parallel gerund usage.

× That's whenever I feel stressed so I can see those photos to remember those old memories.

✓ Whenever I feel stressed, I can look at those photos to remember old memories.

'That's whenever' is unnecessary; 'whenever' alone suffices. Use 'look at' or 'see' photos: 'look at those photos' is more natural. 'old memories' is redundant — memories are inherently of the past; but 'old memories' is acceptable. Removed extraneous 'so' and fixed word order for clarity.

× Yes, according to me, there are so many different views in urban areas according to rural areas, because in urban areas there are different types of things we can see there and according to other rural.

✓ Yes. In my opinion, there are many different views in urban areas compared with rural areas because we can see many different kinds of things in cities, unlike in rural areas.

The original sentence repeats and misuses 'according to' and has unclear structure. Replace 'according to me' with 'in my opinion'. Use 'compared with' or 'compared to' instead of 'according to rural areas'. Remove redundant 'there' and correct 'according to other rural' to 'unlike in rural areas'. This improves clarity and grammatical coherence.

× So there are not that specific type of beauty we can see there.

✓ So there is not that specific type of beauty to be seen there.

Subject-verb agreement and article usage need adjustment: 'type' is singular so use 'there is' not 'there are'. 'that specific type of beauty we can see there' is awkward; 'to be seen there' or 'we can see there' works, but 'to be seen there' is more natural. Alternatively, 'we don't see that specific kind of beauty there.'

× I prefer views in my own country because whenever I visit to some beautiful places, I don't expect that from the other countries.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because when I visit beautiful places there, I don't expect the same from other countries.

Remove unnecessary 'to' after 'visit' (correct: 'visit places'), and adjust tense and phrasing: 'whenever' can be 'when' for clarity. 'I don't expect that from the other countries' is vague; 'I don't expect the same from other countries' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× So according to me, I prefer my own country well so because there are so many beautiful things to see there and also to enjoy.

✓ In my opinion, I prefer my own country because there are many beautiful things to see and enjoy there.

The original contains redundant 'so', awkward 'well so', and repeated 'according to me'. Simplify to 'In my opinion' and combine clauses: 'many beautiful things to see and enjoy there.' This fixes word order and removes redundancy.