Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Reduce hesitations and grammar errors; make the answer more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and avoid repetition. Add one specific example of a memorable photo to enrich the response using a linking word.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, when I visit my family I often take candid shots of my nieces and nephews, and I sometimes post the best ones on my social media because they capture natural emotions.

Suggestion: Correct grammar (use singular/plural and verb agreement) and tighten phrasing. Begin with a direct statement, then give two specific reasons linked clearly (use linking words like 'because' or 'so'). Add a brief concrete example to support your preference.

Example: I prefer views in rural areas because they have more open space and greenery, which helps me relax after a busy week. For instance, walking by a quiet river or through a field of trees always helps me unwind.

Suggestion: Eliminate repetitions and hesitations, fix vocabulary and phrasing (e.g., 'views' not 'fuse'), and give one clear reason plus a contrasting clause. Use linking words like 'because' and 'however' to make ideas coherent and specific (mention a particular memory or place).

Example: I prefer views in my own country because they remind me of childhood memories, such as the beach where I learned to swim. However, I also enjoy scenic places abroad because they offer new perspectives and experiences.

× Yes, I like to taking photos of different views uh, especially when I go to my family, I like to taking photos of them candid umm and sometimes I upload it on my social media, social media.

✓ Yes, I like taking photos of different views, especially when I visit my family. I like taking candid photos of them, and sometimes I upload them on my social media.

The error is using the infinitive with to plus -ing (to taking) which is incorrect. After like, use the gerund without to (like taking) or use the infinitive without -ing (like to take). Also 'go to my family' is unnatural; use 'visit my family'. 'Photos' is plural so use 'them' not 'it'. Combine clauses and remove fillers for clarity.

× I prefer few in rural areas because it have more open feel and greenery.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because they have a more open feel and more greenery.

The noun 'few' is incorrect here; likely meant 'views' (plural). Subject-verb agreement: 'it have' is incorrect; plural subject 'they' requires 'have'. Also add articles/adjectives: 'a more open feel' and 'more greenery' improve naturalness.

× I like greenery so much because it makes me feel relaxed and unwind after a busy week.

✓ I like greenery so much because it makes me feel relaxed and helps me unwind after a busy week.

Parallel structure and verb forms: 'relaxed and unwind' mixes adjective and base verb; use 'helps me unwind' or 'relaxed and unwound'. Adding 'helps me' makes the second action grammatically parallel and clear.

× I prefer, I prefer fuse in my own country because it involved me, my, my to my, uh, child memories.

✓ I prefer, I prefer views in my own country because they remind me of my childhood memories.

'Fuse' is a mispronunciation; correct word is 'views'. 'It involved me' is incorrect usage; use 'remind me of' to express memory. 'My child memories' should be 'my childhood memories'. Also maintain plural agreement: 'views... they remind me'. Remove fillers.

× Umm, but it doesn't mean I don't like umm, fuse abroad.

✓ Umm, but that doesn't mean I don't like views abroad.

'It doesn't mean' is acceptable but 'that doesn't mean' is more natural when referring to the previous idea. 'Fuse' should be 'views'. Keep plural 'views' to match context.

× It's also kind of, uh, special for me, of course.

✓ They are also kind of special to me, of course.

Pronoun reference: 'It' is unclear when referring to 'views' (plural); use 'they' or rephrase. 'Special to me' is more natural than 'special for me' in this context. Maintain number agreement and concise phrasing.